Bob_Bob_8597
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Honestly a new and cool idea to the story is devil fruits. I haven’t read similar stories about devil fruits in the GOT world, and I think that this concept works well. Perhaps make it so that the Targaryens don’t get destroyed. And/or make it so that there are a few Noble houses with devil fruits because if a small house like “Mormont” has a fruit, I’d assumed they’d get attacked or killed to prevent the “threat”.
Good start to the novel that has good story aspects. Really hope you continue to write and don’t drop it since it has great potential. A steady chapter upload would be appreciated