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The Upgrade system

[Ding! Congratulations on obtaining the upgrade system!] A year later... Umm... system, can I take back that upgrade? [NO!] Well then lets hope that no one finds out that I was the one who upgraded the world or else, they are all going to come after me. Hello, This is my first time writing a web novel. I know that there are a lot of things that I could improve on so any constructive criticism will be welcomed. I will read your comments and try to improve my writing. Thank you in advance for reading this novel or at least the synopsis. 200 Power Stones = 1 extra chapter 400 Power Stones = 2 extra chapters There has been a new discord server made for the novel. In there you can give me feedback and suggestions for the novel. You will also be able to help me choose which novel cover I should use and make suggestions for the cover.

Dominion_Sage · 都市
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The Changes

'When you put it that way, it makes it seem like I have no choice.'

'I will take the Gamble'

[Alright]

A wheel came before Dan and started to spin. The wheel was 99.99% red and 0.01% green.

[Please say 'stop' to stop the wheel from spinning]

The wheel stopped spinning ad when it stopped. the arrow was pointing towards the green area'

[Congrulations on changing the world]

[It has been randomly decided that the world will be changed gradually]

Another wheel came up which had 3 colors, red, green, and grey which were equally divided on the wheel. The system asked Dan to spin the wheel one more time.

'Can I ask what this spin is for?'

[This spin is picking if the change will be helpful, harmful or it could be both]

As Dan stopped the wheel from spinning, the arrow landed in the grey area

[The changes are as follows]

[1) Spirit energy goes up by half a point making it go from 0.5 to 1]

[2) Monsters with spirit energy will randomly spawn in the forests]

[3) New herbs will start spawning in the forests]

'Is that all? I thought that there would be more changes'

[You got the gradual change so it isn't too much in the beginning]

[Do you want to tell the people with the system about the new changes?]

'Sure, it doesn't matter too much to me and the more UP points they get, the more likely they are to spend it meaning I would get more UP points.'

[Ding, New Quest]

[Quest: Invistiagate]

[Invistigate the 2 of the 4 old men that you have added to the store system]

[Time Limit: 1 month]

[Reward: 500 UP points]

[failure: -500 UP points]

'I thought that I would get a quest to kill new monsters or gather the new herbs, not get investigate two of the old men'

Just as Dan was thinking that. Sofia and the 4 old men were surprised when they got the notification from the Store System.

They all thought, 'The world is changing and I need to be able to adapt to this quickly.'

Sofia quickly came to Dan's room and knocked on his door.

"Yes, what is it?"

If we get 100 Power Stones then there will be 1 extra chapter.

There has been a new discord server made for the novel. In there you can give me feedback and suggestions for the novel. You will also be able to help me choose which novel cover I should use and make suggestions for the cover.

Discord link - https://discord.gg/h566zub

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