The story is still in progress so there shouldn't be a lot to review on. But no, this story definitely deserve a review, a lengthy one at that. So to start off, I like the female lead, her thoughts was realistically portrayed. *nodding head, yep, that's what I would be thinking too if such thing happen to me! The author created her with an introvert-like appearance, but inside she is very expressive. As for the male lead, tsk, truly a scum! Ahem, for now, but we'll see how much of a scum he is going to be...or maybe not. Lol, author your imagination is limitless, but please don't make your female reader hate him (male lead) too much.
As for grammatically issues, there is some sentences that needs to be reword and bit of capitalization occurring within sentences, not sure if the author intend for that. But it's not a big deal that needs to be fix right away.
In overall, It's very manga-like which is rare for me cause I rather read manga then read text-like manga. But nonetheless this story creates an interesting mood that allows the reader to connect with the female lead, or may be just me, lol. Another thing is I was a bit confuse when she was talking to herself and out of nowhere other characters pop-up which later assume is from her own imagination. I mean you could guess what's going as you read on, but it would be much easier to know that these characters are not physically real...or are they? because while reading through those chapters I thought I was reading a different story. But with that said, this is a good read, and it is heading toward an interesting plot. Keep up the good work, author!
