Shionokami

Hello, hello there, my friend! It is I...Shionokami! Here to answer your question! (4 months later...I'm so sorry about it!!!) First of all, it sure makes me happy to hear, that you enjoy the novel I'm writing =D Now, to answer your question, no, I haven't dropped it and currently, I don't plan on doing something like that either (unless something beyond my control, changes that) I've just been re-editing the chapters (from the very first to the most recent one, but I left a notice on the novel's summary) just to ret-con a few things and make the story, as a whole, better! But unfortunately, when I stared re-editing (which was around July or August, if my memory does not fail me) my computer had given up on life and so, I had to edit on my phone (which isn't my favorite type of device to do such a thing) there were also a few other things, but I won't go into details... However, now I have a new computer and I have been working on this re-editing, once again! But you'll have to be patient, since there's still a lot of things to finish up (and I do advice you to re-read it all again, once it's done! The chapters will be bigger and there will be a lot of new events happening!) but then again, I'll be providing a small note, with all changes! And I think this pretty much covers it up! It will take some time to finish up, so please little bit of patience and once again, I'm sorry for the (extremely) late reply!

Thanks! =) I'm already feeling a lot better, but I still can't play any games, so that will have to wait for now XD

Well, I never said that they were in Japan, now did I? XD But well, maybe I should have said where they were, right from the begining. Yeah, I kinda goofed up... I'm sorry about this one.

Thanks ^^ I'm happy that you liked it!

I don't usually read a lot of stories about vampires, but from the few I have read (this one included) I have to admit that this one has been the best of them all! With that said, onto the review proper, first the characters, their just *chef's kiss* perfect! They have all personalities and all of them feel different and unique, something you don't see too often, too be honest and that is always welcome! Secondly I can't talk about the characters without talking about the extremely beautiful and well done writing! I was honestly, blown away by the way everything is discribed and especially by how artistacly everything is described! All in all, loved the characters and loved the beautiful writing style that pull you in almost instantly, the moment you start the first chapter! Definitely gonna keep an eye on this one, that's for sure!

A bit hard to point them out, so I advice you to use the grammarly website, you can go there and make an account, then copy and paste the chapter there and it will tell you the mistakes you made, it's pretty easy to use too ^^

I already gave it a look It's pretty good, so far ^^ There's a few mistakes here and there, but it's not that bad and you can change it later on and you should try edit it a bit, so it flows a little bit better ^^ But as I said, take your time with it and keep up the good work!

Good ^^ Can't wait to hava a look =)

Kind of hard to explain, but most of the names I come up with for the charaters, have to either sound good, when I say them out loud and I also have to like the meaning behind them and I think that pretty much covers it, when it comes to the way I come up/choose names ^^

I see, I see good luck with it, my friend ^^ And if you need help feel free to ask =)