The Magus: Echoes of the forgotten

Since I noticed that many authors tend to give their own novels 5 stars, I figured why not follow suit and do the same for mine. So, let's give it a solid 5 stars! But joking aside, I truly value constructive criticism for my book. If you could take the time to share your thoughts on my grammar, structure, or anything else that could use improvement, I'd genuinely appreciate it.

It's better than most novels on here but I would not call it a masterpiece. The writing is ok but nothing where I just want to keep reading. It's not immersive at all but potential wise it got some.

Nice remake, with the grammar issue solved and the story line getting solid it's no longer just potential , it's going somewhere and i like where it's going, much 🥰 author.

I thought I was trippin looking at this book cover with almost no view and rates, anyway it seems you have made some changes to the book author San, raaaah

Amithaba[img=recommend] this story got what it takes to land in the big leagues, but what's captured my attention was the characters they are fleshed out, they are not one dimensional specially the Mc, he feel like as a real person that's just how good the writing is we need more[img=update]

I see you made some changes here and there author-nim, truthfully speaking this way better than the first 🥇 this is what i call a change😎. At first i only gave it a review because author-nim was humble, but the grammar was childish, sorry if i offended you author-nim 😭😭😭 but i had to say it and i am proud to say your grammar had a dramatic change keep it up author-nim.

The story is pretty good so far. It's too early to judge the book, but so far i can only judge it based on what it currently got, it's full of potential, if anyone is interested in reading mystery and magic type this is it for you.

I think, "The Magus: Echoes of the Forgotten" is a fantastic web novel that is sure to delight fans of the fantasy genre. With its rich world-building, engaging characters, and thrilling plot, it's a must-read for anyone looking for a new and exciting adventure.

You can't tell me the author doesn't have a dark humor, man really said bang new beginning after killing off the Mc just like that💀 still investing early😁

We got ourselves a new gem 😍 by the looks of it it won't dissapoint by the way hagar is just like me fr fr😋😋😋 keep it coming [img=update]

I like what i'm seeing here, the story is amazing. I don't know why the author belittles himself 😑 for starters the characters are fleshed out and there is no moment init that makes it boring.

Potential wise this story got it, the characters are insanely good, the grammar is good other than that the only concern i got is the world building most books mess up there, don't fumble on me author.

Alright second here and i'm investing. 🤭 the story is good, the mc is good and all but Noah 😭😫. C'mon don't do him like that he is so loyal 🤧 [img=update] and keep it coming.

Sir yes sir now that's what i call an upgrade holly smokes. invested early on and it's finally paying off, hats of to the author. Now with a steady and continuous releases it will become one of the best books out there.

The book is certainly one of the best i have read but it’s funny how it’s most liked tag is action yet contains no action, loved your writing but it gets boring with the info dump you put here and there. Like if you agree with me🐐👹😉

Alright i was here since the first day and i can confidently say this novel didn't fall out of my expectations sometimes it even proved to be better, my only problem here is that the updates take like forever i mean it's chapter release was good(not satisfying) one chapter a day and then it became like one to two chapters a week, you can't do this to us!!!😡🤬