It's better than most novels on here but I would not call it a masterpiece. The writing is ok but nothing where I just want to keep reading. It's not immersive at all but potential wise it got some.
elbas
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Thanks for the critics, I will better myself.
No one is said it was a masterpiece 👀, no offense author.
Correct your grammar first😒
Balvan:No one is said it was a masterpiece 👀, no offense author.