The law of Fiction: Harem in the fiction world

-beta mc - dom female leads -simp mc -system slave - clueless mc ...... . . .... .. ... Do you still need more?..

mc made this unreadable for me ... seems like the author read a ntr novel and was like that's the perfect mc..L

Shouldn’t have expected much from a novel where the MC lets his harem members have romantic feelings for eachother. Good luck on writing this cuck trash, author. 👍

Came here for just one reason and there is plenty of it in here.

I can sew why my recommendations led me here.

hints of yuri?? no thanks bro ............................................................................................,...............

Can't find a decent harem fic nowadays. Most harem fics say NO-NTR but when a girl does it to your harem it's ok, its not NTR. Am really curios if a girl just came and made out with your girl, you let her because she's a girl. How very hypocritical of people to hate NTR but when a girl cuckss you it's ok.

After reading a bit of this book, the synopsis is a clear lie, unless you're looking for a Beta C**k MC, don't read this story. MC is dragged arround by a bunch of nobodies, no information is given to him and his system punishes him for not doing as it says with no explanation. Trash Story.

main problem is the editing their is non so yah it's confusing to find out who's talking and when the system gives mission and so on that's the main problem for me and that's just at chapter 3 or so

just fix the grammar people are paying for this

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The story is horrible, nothing to do with the synopsis, the mc is useless who lets himself be handled by all, clearly it is a novel where women are in control, there is no perversion in seeing an mc being useless. The system is also useless, it would be reasonable for them to treat it that way because it doesn't have a system, but the author wanted to make a system novel and I didn't take advantage of it, it's more of a novel about the errand boy and his owners, literally rubbish.

This is a terrible novel in my opinion. The writing is completely wrong, the author messes up so often that you don't even question it after a few chapters. But that's not even the worst part of it, there is no real story, I may have left a bit early but I think 20 chaps is enough to tell it's bad.

I like the mom and that's all you need to know.

It's a shi ittt and nonsensical novel. Don't read it and author just hang yourself fir writing such poooop.

The writing and grammar are horrible amongst other things it’s like the without puts 0 effort into his writing and then just releases the chapter.

At first, I thought that it was a generic novel but I was wrong. The characters have their own personality and personal goals. Its a fun read for sure.

if you have a cuck fetishism this is for you

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So far this novel is excellent. Keep up the great work!