Demon_Evil

Don't read it, literally the author made a yuri novel and just added the supposed protagonist, it would be better if the author who already lost his motivation making this garbage finished it and retired

Boring the author tries to give it a touch of suspense and intrigue but the truth is that he can't, the first 100 chapters were interesting, but then get bored wanting to grow up and overvaluing the son of heaven, in my opinion if the mc doesn't act So he is not the protagonist, I feel that the author overestimated the fact that the novel was well received and stopped thinking about the story.

I liked the novel, it had a quick success but I was disappointed that it gave prominence and miracles to the enemies, there are easily 10 chapters telling the adventures of Ye Chen who is the enemy, if the author is going to try to give golden fingers to the enemies I will have I had to leave this novel that I thought was different, good luck but for me it's no longer interesting

The story is horrible, nothing to do with the synopsis, the mc is useless who lets himself be handled by all, clearly it is a novel where women are in control, there is no perversion in seeing an mc being useless. The system is also useless, it would be reasonable for them to treat it that way because it doesn't have a system, but the author wanted to make a system novel and I didn't take advantage of it, it's more of a novel about the errand boy and his owners, literally rubbish.

Disappointment, everything was going well until the author wanted to enhance his morale, it's supposed to be an erotic novel and you give him powers to do things that you normally can't, from chapter 96 he stopped the protagonist's impulses, if you were going to do that you would have done it from the start and don't give him abilities that break morale. I read this novel because I thought that thanks to the theme of fiction and fantasy I could read something out of the ordinary, not something governed by reason, for those like me who are looking for something to distract themselves and that is different, do not read this and more of the same and at the end The author either does not like these types of situations to write them or was afraid. For those who want a novel that is not governed by morality and can force the characters, read Netori System. In my opinion, the author was not afraid of criticism and wrote what he wanted from his heart.

With the author's apologies, but I will simply focus on saying that I did not like it, many scenarios were too forced and rushed apart from a lot of characters with a childish personality. It's supposed to be a semi-erotic novel, not a comedy with characters pretending to be cute and silly. If it bothers the author, delete my rating but I will continue to publish with a low rating based on my opinion

For those who are interested, it is my personal opinion, the fact of lengthening things so much and extra detailed explanations really annoys me, I mean to kill a wild boar it took more than 5 chapters between combat and explanations. I should also have said that as a reader I am not a fan of novels that promote protagonism through transformations, the fact of having to interact and conquer being another person is not to my liking, the protagonist is supposed to be cold, calculating and cruel but really He does everything through his pet, I see him more as a tamer of beasts than an evil protagonist. Adding, it was also commented that he would have many relationships and would even steal some, but there is nothing like that, rarely is he seen interacting with women and more with his true form, the few encounters explained, he pretended to be someone else. I don't think this is the case, but my opinion is going to be criticized, let it be without offense and verbal abuse

Someone who is up to date with the novel can tell me if the author erased the existence of Mara and Yuri because from what I read these two things made me unpleasant, thanks if someone can answer