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This is a terrible novel in my opinion. The writing is completely wrong, the author messes up so often that you don't even question it after a few chapters. But that's not even the worst part of it, there is no real story, I may have left a bit early but I think 20 chaps is enough to tell it's bad.

Honestly I feel like people nowadays are fine with just any mediocre work This story is terrible, nothing properly connects, we are just thrown from one scene to another without any explanation and when writing these scenes it feels like he forgets all that he wrote in the past and just inputs new things without using common sense, frankly I think it's pathetic that I see only 5 star reviews.

isn't spiel German? so it's probably something German and spiel means write I think ur probably wrong either eay

please change it to magician it's illogical to call it magecian, I really hope you look at comments

it's truly a shame that jks decided to drop this absolute masterpiece, I have fallen in love with it even more than mvs and it's my favorite out of all his works, his new level up zombie ain't for me too, I wish he would work on this instead of thst

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nah easily god tier lad

this is a copy of mvs through and through, the entire book is pretty much just taking ideas off of mvs and giving it his own spin on it, I hope you clarify that you at least got your idea from there