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The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Complete]

作者: Daddy
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What is The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Complete]

WebNovel で公開されている、Daddy の作者が書いた The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Complete] の小説を読んでください。"Why are these Witches so thirsty? I just want to Grind!"HP AU, Hogwarts starts at 13, Fem Harry, Harem, Gamer OC (not SI), Nerdy/Scholarly/Bookworm MC, Future Incest, Harem-ComedyA typical, arrogant ...

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"Why are these Witches so thirsty? I just want to Grind!" HP AU, Hogwarts starts at 13, Fem Harry, Harem, Gamer OC (not SI), Nerdy/Scholarly/Bookworm MC, Future Incest, Harem-Comedy A typical, arrogant SI Gamer dies without fanfare. His System moves on, finding a new host. Native to the universe and without out-of-context knowledge, Atlas White, Hogwarts' newest Assistant Professor, is chosen to explore this new, seemingly magical, phenomenon. Chapters are 3k-5k+ words long and should be coming out ~twice per week Early chapters (~215k words!) are available at my Pat reon.com/dryskies_btb

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aku bekerja sebagai karyawan magang di kantor teman papaku. tanpa sepengetahuanku, aku dijodohkan dengan kevin anak dari pak direktur sekaligus teman papaku. malam dimana kami baru bertemu, kami bahkan sudah melakukan hubungan intim yang dilarang dilakukan sebelum menikah. Tangannya membelai surai rambutku lembut. Matanya menatapku tak berkedip, seperti sedang menghipnotis. Aku terpaku, badanku mematung, jantungku seakan berhenti berdetak. Kevin menciumku, ciuman lembut, seolah mengajariku cara berciuman. Otakku memberontak tidak membenarkan ini, tapi tubuhku tidak bisa menolak. Kevin terus melumat bibirku, membasahi dengan salivanya. Benda kenyal itu tersa nikmat menempel di bibirku. Ini adalah ciuman pertamaku, direnggut tanpa meminta izin terlebih dahulu. aku sangat menikmati, membuatku melayang. "Aakhhh.." Sial. Aku mendesah. kevin menyringai "Hello my sweety." ucapnya menampikkan senyum smirknya, lalu merebahkanku di atas ranjang. sebuah hubungan tanpa batas, melayang, mendesah penuh nikmat. "Aku mencintaimu, mari kita lanjutkan ronde ke-tiga."

Dandelion793 · 都市
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3 Chs

Nature Douluo [RE-MAKE]

Ruo Lan is a transmigrated person, He died of illness in his original world and traveled into the douluo continent. Traveled across, he already awakened his consciousness at the age of 1, He was an abandoned baby that was picked up by an elderly. Growing up, The elderly who had a medicine garden in his possession taught him how to make medicine out of them and how to take care of them, Ruo Lan of course, full-heartedly learn and took care of the plants there, He was very grateful that he, had a healthy body here, and a grandpa that took care of him. He was thinking of his peaceful life here and how good it will be if this lasted forever, He doesn't want to be involved in the power struggles of the douluo continent. He just wants to take care of the elderly who took care of him and of course, the medicine garden, He likes his peaceful life. But this won't last forever... At the age of Six, he awakened the support spirit soul [Zìrán zhī guān] Crown Of Nature.... What will happen to Rou Lan's peaceful life?... A/N: The new book won't have any romance plot. [Author came back with a remake, He felt that the past book is trash and very cliche+ cringe, He will try his best to make this one better.]

Yanlin_Shi · ファンタジー
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2 Chs

Salvation from a Stranger

Salvation from a Stranger When does the word betrayal become valid and what does that mean to validate betrayal. Everyone has heard the story of Lucifer but who betrayed who, when we have never witnessed it and who was validated for their actions. Many people throughout time have faced assassination from once loyal people, so how do I confirm betrayal when my feelings have always betrayed me. Words I wanted to scream till my voice could no longer release a sound and instead, my feelings told me otherwise. Each time only continued the same patterns which brought me depression. If the person you loved for years never considered pushing away another person's advances, is that betrayal. Maybe it's the moment you decided to try and mend what's broken even though every other time was a catastrophe, only to see the one you love not refuse the lips of another. Do you then accept that as a betrayal or am I just petty and unable to confront things. Was it me who betrayed the expectations placed on me, maybe it was my betrayal when I walked away. Maybe I was the one betraying when I set fire to everything we collected and walked away. Maybe I'm just a bad person that made wrong choices with limited information. However how many times has that happened in our relationship. Maybe if I disappear all the bad will disappear as well and I can just be free from this life, a life unwanted. That's what I believed and yet, how does a stranger offer a hand while the one you love ignores you. The words from a stranger seemed much warmer than every conversation we ever had, is that how she made you feel Paige. I wonder about that but for how long will you hold a place inside my mind causing such confusion. Writers note) This will be rather long to start and updates will be slow as well. The reason is that I'll be watching for interest involved. This is another experiment story and this was upgraded from the Lines stories. The stories will follow a Different perspective, due to the way it is being written Mistakes will happen. Everything was done from the phone and fixed using grammar correction. Yet I also used a laptop to review the grammar which has led to some conflict. This also includes my own personal views on how things were written as well. Lastly, this may be my last project created, which means I may just finish what is written already before stopping.

Lightxxseeker · LGBT+
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LostM
LostMLv5LostM

I saw grind and my first thought was Harry Squatter.

10mth

Daddy
Daddy作者Daddy

Don't mind me. Just giving the obligatory 5 star review. This story is a Gamer OC story set in a HP AU (aged up characters, some genderswaps, and expanded magic). It won't be an OP gamer. The focus of the story is mainly on the process of grinding skills and stats, along with the harem aspect of it.

10mth
Pekokopiko
PekokopikoLv13Pekokopiko

he plot and writing itself is good. character conversation isn't too rigid or bland, there's some progress for sure but can't talk much about character development since it's only 4 chapter.but this author feels like reading too much Japanese LN, y'all know how Japanese MC are, low eq, dense etc. but at least there's some progress on it like I said before, and it's still 4 chapter. so you may like it, or maybe you wouldn't.. I know I wouldn't since I hate that kind of MC

10mth
Tales_de_Mileto
Tales_de_MiletoLv1Tales_de_Mileto

good god another of these "Japanese MC" denseness...

10mth
Siuuu
SiuuuLv3Siuuu

I just read upto 3 chapters and i wanted to drop this novel more than ten times. like this is annoying and typical brainless novel. Mc is foodless,homeless-penniless, everything less and a crybaby, like with magic at least you won't be starved you can conjure water and atleast work in muggle world or do small jobs in magical world but no MC is an idiot. Don't waste your time in this novel.

9mth
DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14DaoistyQNGiX

One of the worst MCs in any Harry Potter fanfic story that I have ever read. Pathetic, dumb, super beta MC so do not bother unless you love stories like that.

7mth
Obsideon
ObsideonLv4Obsideon

For support, For support , For support For support, For support , For support For support, For support , For support For support, For support , For support For support, For support , For support For support, For support , For support For support, For support , For support

10mth
literl010
literl010Lv1literl010

Initially I'd given this a 3.5 review and dropped it at chapter 4, put off by the excessive denseness of the protagonist, but someone recommended I revisit it and I'm really glad I did. He remains dense, but it does start getting better and less of a problem. I think part of the issue was I feel the author sometimes labors the foreshadowing a bit too much, further emphasizing the myriad of things the protagonist misses and amplifying his perceived level of denseness, which had really started to grate on me. However, I think this has started getting better and is more balanced in the more recent chapters. That is the only real criticism I can draw, everything else from the fun twist on the system premise, the plot, characterization, word choice, grammar, and long chapters are all fantastic. If like me you're put off by the protagonist at first, definitely try to stick with it. I don't think you'll be disappointed with the current trajectory. Whilst I still have some doubts as I'm still not that keen on this brand of comedy, I'm definitely looking forward to more.

10mth
Jose_matos
Jose_matosLv3Jose_matos

I would like to like this story but the mc is way to passive and easily dominated by all the girls with romantic interest in him. They just push him around an he accepts it like it’s normal. Everything he does is because of the girls.

7mth
M_Static
M_StaticLv4M_Static

Idea is great but if fast became harem trash... More attention is paid to women than to magic and the system. When I first started reading I really liked the story about going back to school. The focus very quickly shifted from improving oneself and magic to women.

8mth
Lizrock
LizrockLv4Lizrock

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9mth
Twasasetup
TwasasetupLv2Twasasetup

Some random guy gets the gamer system and starts banging all the chicks while claiming to have some inexplicable bond to each and everyone of them since their first meeting. The End.

6mth
read3r_9030
read3r_9030Lv14read3r_9030

5 star is needed for this fanfiction, not only is it a proper grammar fanfic but is also one of the best gamer system aspects I have seen. i honestly can't wait to read more as the author makes the characters, personalities and conversation flow properly, the author makes it feel like there is emotion behind the characters words instead of no personality mc's that we all probably read about. At first the system might seem like a cultivation system at least to me, but it really isn't and I am glad that this system doesn't do the ordinary xp and levels like other gamers have.

10mth
Krypton71
Krypton71Lv12Krypton71

This is just a placeholder review and not my actual ratings for this story. Author, will this have yuri/polyamory like in your Kitsune fic? It's an important question because, to be honest, was a big supporter of the Kitsune fic until I was bulldozed by the unexpected polyamory before the tag was included in the synopsis. Anyway, I hope you get round to answering my question.

10mth
ODlUM
ODlUMLv4ODlUM

10mth
WorldofASH
WorldofASHLv14WorldofASH

A really solid fanfic with most of what you would want for a casual read. Doesn't feel stilted and the characters do feel alive. Please keep it up!

9mth
Elpapichulo15
Elpapichulo15Lv14Elpapichulo15

my first review better appreciate i really like the idea

10mth
Ayu123456
Ayu123456Lv4Ayu123456

Very well written Pls don’t drop Update more often

10mth
UwuCreyo
UwuCreyoLv12UwuCreyo

5his is literally a diamond i hope author inspiration will last until the end of the fanfic🫶🫶

10mth
Targas
TargasLv2Targas

This FF has huge potencial, worth a try _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

10mth

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