No idea how many people will see this, but Gotham's Dead End Bar is coming back soon. I should be releasing new chaps on patreon in March 2025... *cough* plug *cough* pat reon.com/dryskies_btb
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OC slave folklore. The name is just a powerful coincidence (or maybe Anakin - a former slave - wanted to name his daughter after a deity of hope in canon...)
I have a tendency towards monologue to 'get into' the POV character's head -- both for myself as a writer and for the readers. I perfectly understand why you might find it tedious, but I don't think it's unnecessary. I'll try to be more aware of getting carried away with it going forward, though. Good criticism!