Review Detail of read3r_9030 in The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Complete]

5 star is needed for this fanfiction, not only is it a proper grammar fanfic but is also one of the best gamer system aspects I have seen. i honestly can't wait to read more as the author makes the characters, personalities and conversation flow properly, the author makes it feel like there is emotion behind the characters words instead of no personality mc's that we all probably read about. At first the system might seem like a cultivation system at least to me, but it really isn't and I am glad that this system doesn't do the ordinary xp and levels like other gamers have.