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The Golden Prince

作者: Last_Quincy
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A man dies and is reincarnated in the world of ASOIAF as a Targaryen Prince. Follow him as he navigates through the world of Planetos as well as the intricacies of being in an era where all the Targaryens have is their reputation. Will he help reignite his families legacy or will he end up destroying it. (R-18) [It is my first fanfic and not in my native language. The characters belong to George RR Martin. I do not possess anything other than my OCs.] my Patreon link If you guys want to support me - patreon.com/Last_Quincy

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Writing quality 4 stars: Little little mistakes and punctuation errors here and there(would have given 5 stars but sorry I have ocd) Updating stability: I dropped this story once because I thought it was dropped😅😅😅sorry if there were real life problems but it receives 3 stars Story Development 3 stars: What’s going on I know(saw it from authors thoughts) that you’re confident with what you’re doing but personally I’m not seeing anything. Plot is as meh as it is to me. Only reason it’s three and not two or one is because it maintains that semblance of medieval life(no offense) and that author is not afraid to change the plot(far better than ones where they rehash canon but are weirdly proud of it thinking they’re writing masterpieces😅😅😅) no offense. Character development 1 star: Excuse me in advance I’m going to be harsh with this. Scrap off your mc. I don’t know what you were thinking to make a reincarnated person blush to kids and stammer when interacting with someone like oberyn whereas he’s smooth to giants like olenna Stick to one(personally you shouldn’t have made him reincarnated, would have made things better and more understanding) Mcs training and all that excess things I see are cos 90(no effect). In fact it’s trash(that’s how bad the character development is). Only redeemed by the fact that writing quality world background and story development can pique one’s interest. Otherwise, bleh. World development 4 stars: Author doesn’t seem scared of adding his own tidbits to the planetos setting(wonderful).

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