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I am going to leave the novel for the reasons cited in the previous chapter. moreover I prefer heroes, and here we have a guy who is much too passive, that will certainly change, but it's not pleasant to see from a high point (in the other novel taste or reincarnation in general, in chapters 20 the mc is at least a teenager and has his plans already in place.) there at ch31 the only concrete thing that the mc is doing with this future information is to burn the parchment of reagar's prophecy, and even then it was of no use . thank you for all the author, really I will give a good rating of 3 anyway.

No está mal, pero, el protagonista comienza a perder protagonismo. Esto no estaría mal en una película o una novela de un profesional, pero esto es un fanfiction y mientras más complejo algo que debería ser sencillo, más tedioso se vuelve intentar leerlo.

It started great. Mc was smart, charming and likeable. By Ch 30+ he is an angsty idiot. Too much drama, too much negativity. Maybe, he'll get through it but it's just too much all at once. I'll admit it's really well written and 5 stars to that. If I reviewed at chapter 15 this would've been 5 stars across the board. The story took a heavy nosedive since then. It's one angsty drama after another and every time it's nearly solved it gets worse. Starting to remind me of grimdark, in that things suck, then you get hopeful, and it looks like there is a solution on the horizon, only for your hopes to get dashed and then things suck more than before. Maybe things change and problems are solved but that's it for me. the story has lost something special, and it won't get that back

Writing quality 4 stars: Little little mistakes and punctuation errors here and there(would have given 5 stars but sorry I have ocd) Updating stability: I dropped this story once because I thought it was dropped😅😅😅sorry if there were real life problems but it receives 3 stars Story Development 3 stars: What’s going on I know(saw it from authors thoughts) that you’re confident with what you’re doing but personally I’m not seeing anything. Plot is as meh as it is to me. Only reason it’s three and not two or one is because it maintains that semblance of medieval life(no offense) and that author is not afraid to change the plot(far better than ones where they rehash canon but are weirdly proud of it thinking they’re writing masterpieces😅😅😅) no offense. Character development 1 star: Excuse me in advance I’m going to be harsh with this. Scrap off your mc. I don’t know what you were thinking to make a reincarnated person blush to kids and stammer when interacting with someone like oberyn whereas he’s smooth to giants like olenna Stick to one(personally you shouldn’t have made him reincarnated, would have made things better and more understanding) Mcs training and all that excess things I see are cos 90(no effect). In fact it’s trash(that’s how bad the character development is). Only redeemed by the fact that writing quality world background and story development can pique one’s interest. Otherwise, bleh. World development 4 stars: Author doesn’t seem scared of adding his own tidbits to the planetos setting(wonderful).

It is a great self insert Targaryen story. It is great that the author is going for a different route of becoming the hand of the king instead of going with the same ascending throne plot.

Great start not sloppy in execution and the writing itself is pretty concise Excited to see where you take it //////////////////////////////

I love the self insert Targaryen stories where the si has to fix the dynasty before it’s to late. I hope it regular updates and doesn’ t just stop there.

Is this story still being continued or dropped ?? But I also like the story, I’m like really hooked.