More……. please!!!!!!! Everything going perfect so far, please continue with the chapter lengths

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

The author will read feedback and fix his mistakes aa he did recently as he messed up in the story and seemed to delete the chaps to fix his mistakes which is something i haven't seen as people will just wing it and drop the story later on major respect for the author and he seems to read and listen to the critics👍

One of the best I hop you keep writing everything about It is really good. And I hope you also have a good day

The story is very good. Both the character and interactions are perfect. A character who says what he wants, when he wants, but still cares about people. Perfect. The only thing that could be fixed is the writing. It's not that it's bad in terms of grammar, it's more because of the huge paragraphs and lines put together.Sometimes it's hard to follow. But other than that the story is going very well. Congratulations.

Solid first chapter hopefully this doesn’t get abandoned as I’m looking forward to this.

So far it's been a joy to read. Keep up the good work!!!

Really Good!!! please don't drop........

Suprizingly one of the best so far I'll start giving my free powerstones away hope you get more recongnition

Hoping for an future rewrite as now author knows how to do the interactions and he also stopped simping for alison later on too late to continue as i believe it now lost it peak height/powerstones recomendations. (ps don't do the girls encouraging alison if you do rewrite again she have to make the decision and not have it handed to her)