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Blizzard54k
Blizzard54kAuthor2yr
2022-07-21 01:27

This is review after 167 chapters... I think I've written pretty good story considering it was my first time.💪(Of course, there are many other authors who have written countless times better than I did) However, This story also has MANY flaws such as some grammatical mistakes and some inconsistency in story. If you read the story, you are welcome to criticize it and I'll try to correct and improve based on your suggestions if I find them good. ***However, there are some things which you won't like but it doesn't mean that it's sh** so don't try to judge it and read if you like if not no one gonna force you to read. Happy reading~

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Blizzard54k
4.5
766 Chs

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ReF4SH
ReF4SHLv13

Okay author san~

2yr
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Shubh_Mittal
Shubh_MittalLv3

Very good and interesting plot.

2yr
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Blizzard54k
Blizzard54kAuthor

Noted.

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2yr
Zai_Carbonell
Zai_CarbonellLv11

I ship Eliana and Max as well as Max and Flavia 😍

2yr
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Robert_Tene_5577
Robert_Tene_5577Lv1

Hey Blizzard! Is there a discord group we can join? I want to contribute (proofread/fix some gramatical errors) to this novel. The story is very great and it's a shame to see the quality of the first chapters so low compared to the later ones (grammar wise, not story wise). Do let me know if there's a discord group (or your discord) I can get a hold of.

2yr
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Blizzard54k
Blizzard54kAuthor

Please contact me on discord Blizzard54k#5923

Robert_Tene_5577:Hey Blizzard! Is there a discord group we can join? I want to contribute (proofread/fix some gramatical errors) to this novel. The story is very great and it's a shame to see the quality of the first chapters so low compared to the later ones (grammar wise, not story wise). Do let me know if there's a discord group (or your discord) I can get a hold of.
2yr
UncleDodger
UncleDodgerLv11

it been day 14 of nnn I was distracted by thumbnail bring me here luckily I have a meme to counter attack

2yr
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HannazRolynn
HannazRolynnLv3

can someone give me the tags? Any NTR? yuri? Anything that will turn ppl off...?

2yr
1
Blizzard54k
Blizzard54kAuthor

There is no NTR or Yuri. Give it a try.

HannazRolynn:can someone give me the tags? Any NTR? yuri? Anything that will turn ppl off...?
2yr
4
HannazRolynn
HannazRolynnLv3

I need to be careful with picking novels since I almost got traumatised reading novels on this app.

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2yr
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Raven_Master
Raven_MasterLv14

can he increase others powers

2yr
FanTazy26
FanTazy26Lv2

Author sire please write moreee~

1yr
Jesse_Boyer
Jesse_BoyerLv15

your discord link does not work.

1yr
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CharlieRider
CharlieRiderLv4

please more action and les of the deed

1yr
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The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4

is this dropped?

1yr
1
Kiritoga
KiritogaLv14

That’s what I’m to figure out before starting

The_Dark_Hydrax:is this dropped?
1yr
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FlankerKun
FlankerKunLv14

Same,I feel like it’s dropped tbh

Kiritoga:That’s what I’m to figure out before starting
1yr
Victory_Chukwuka
Victory_ChukwukaLv2

the novel is beautiful ❤️ i mist say but the chapters needs to be increased pls is very interesting novel am always waiting for the chapters everyday if it can be 3 chapters or 4 a day that will be very nice ☺️🙂

1yr
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Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv11

Link discord pls

1yr
CHAOS_FOOLISH
CHAOS_FOOLISHLv12

Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me

1yr
1
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Antony_M
Antony_MLv14

This is the kind of novel you get into for the *plot* , stay for the fun and keep reading for the plot. It has its ups and downs, but I still definitely recommend.

1mth

Wyoian
WyoianLv15

I am really enjoying this novel. I like the story and the world building is pretty good. The MC is not so overpowered that it's not just him mowing through opponents. He has his ups and downs that make the story more engaging. Keep up the good work author

1mth
_The_Big_Dog_915
_The_Big_Dog_915Lv15

This story actually includes everything in the title. The MC and all subsequent interactions fill the bill. I continue to look forward to reading each chapter.

1mth
Sil3nt_1
Sil3nt_1Lv15

I love this novel so far and I just caught up after reading for 2 days now I'm so sad that I gotta wait for more chapters. I like the characters the background the system I like everything about it and can't wait to continue reading. I recommend this novel to everyone. Thank you Author for a great story I will continue to support

2yr
Leficious
LeficiousLv1

Reveal spoiler

2yr
SeductiveWildPussy
SeductiveWildPussyLv3

Add ALL women to the harém....... HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM

2yr
Rtrlx
RtrlxLv3

The novel is decent, not amazing, but not bad, but as I read, I kept on noticing multiple inconsistencies, and also, the MC, Max, is actually an idiot, he has no brains, he’s rash, and thinks pretty much only with his sausage. Early on in the chaps, he says after he got cucked by his friend, he only treats others the way he gets treated, but he completely disregards what he said just a few chaps later. Also, I don’t like the fact that he was flirting with his dad’s wife even though his dad is actually a good guy, that cares for him once again disregarding his previous statements. Like bro, your father was one of the only good guys that actually cared for you, and you trying to Ntr him. For me personally, I stopped reading during at that Prince chapter where he just he gets mad, explodes, and doesn’t even think of the consequences. Once again, this is not a bad novel, it’s just average, you could find a novel like this everywhere.

2yr
Altara_Blue
Altara_BlueLv14

One of my favorite new novels right now, I hope you won’t drop this but I don’t think it will happen with the way it glues right now. Thanks for this amazing novel.

2yr
LoveHarem
LoveHaremLv4

Add ALL women to the harém hehehe HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM

2yr
Narcii_9dar
Narcii_9darLv12

Well honestly the story was good. It has some interesting things if you know what I mean. I only gave this a 3.8 because of CCCRP ( common chinese cliche romance plot ) scene where the fl separates with mc cuz she got some unique physique like IJPDYB (Ice Jade Phoenix Divine Yin Physique /Body ) which attracted a SEOIV ( Supreme Elder Of Ice Valley) when she was 'coincidentally' passing by. This novel would have been perfect if not for this CCCRP. Anyway its only an opinion from my perspective so if you have no problem with this CCCRP then give this a try

2yr
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