Chris_Gill

he just got named CEO that day, and Mom has just bowed out an hour or so ago...

so next chapter her name becomes Valarie???

so is he neutralizing his sperms or not? if he has the ability you need to tell the reader if he is or not.

sorry it explains nothing. it feels like there is a huge chunk of the story missing. It goes from he is happy after showing them the elements in the training room. They walk into the living area, mom says he is going to the academy.. Then he instantly is pissed beyond reason.

I don't see it either. He awakened, passed out. He awake, gave Aur the death eyes, he mentioned his lust dragon basis, said he would keep those abilities secret. The instantly went training. He showed most of the elements. She says you will go to the academy. Now he is acting like she gave him this detailed check in schedule, rules, etc... because there is no basis for his anger you read his response before as a "no problem mom, I am ok with going."

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

Well there is slide tackle in Soccer. Unfortunately the sports portion is so poorly written it confuses anyone who has a clue about actual sports. 1. Only the Goalie can "carry the ball" . If anyone else does it is a penalty "Handball". Other players dribble the ball. Using the word Carry in Soccer/Football just confuses everyone. 2. If you are practicing you are only doing it within your team. If you are actually competing against another team you are having a match not a practice...

yeah Liam and Mary literally use this same attack pattern.

yeah it is literally the exact same tactics Mary Liam and his spirit use. no difference.

My response to them would be "Well in a life and death fight if my spirits lose I am dead. If me doing something can tip the scale in my favor why would I stand back and just keep perking myself off in the back??"