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Strongest Eccentric Consort

作者: Ye Zhiqing
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As the daughter chosen by the Heavens, she was already extraordinary from birth. However, with her talents concealed, she was treated like trash and mercilessly betrayed. So, she decided to let her supreme capabilities shine! From then on, her bloodline had been awoken. Everything was possible—refining antidotes and weapons through alchemy, taming the dragons and phoenixes, and even being the ultimate ruler of the world. Since then, millions of people admired her and she lived up to her name as the strongest concubine in the world! Only that cold, evil and immensely domineering Ice Emperor, whom she had accidentally provoked, loved, protected and helped her everywhere… “Oh dear, after he has treated me like that, how can I ever like someone else? This man is really cunning!”

Chapter 1Closely Attached Sisters?

Qingyun city.

Beyond the City Lord's mansion.

Boom!

In the ranges of rocky mountains, a ray of shining sword light broke apart in an instant!

"Successful!" A beautiful young girl dressed in white slightly curled the corners of her mouth. A tinge of a smile filled with happiness was revealed on her face. She happily congratulated a young girl wearing a blue dress. "Congratulations, Sister Xingchen. You have finally mastered the third form of the [Mountain River Sword Technique]! You indeed live up to the name of the Genius of our Qingyun city."

Lou Xingchen's face also showed a slight smile. "If not for you saving me, Qianxue, I wouldn't have been able to learn the complete [Mountain River Sword Technique]… "

As she spoke those words, she looked at the eyes of the young girl donning a white dress. Her eyes became intermixed with a touch of complexity and jealousy. "Talking about this, it took me a whole four years to master [Mountain River Sword Technique]. However, Qianxue, you only used one year to master the third form of [Mountain River Sword Technique] to perfection. You are the real genius. It's a pity… "

As she talked about it, the unhappiness on Lou Xingchen's face slightly faded. She sounded as if she was pitying the young girl. "It's a pity you, Qianxue, used 10 years but can't perfect your elementary force. No matter how good the talent for practicing martial arts is, it's just empty if… you cannot become a real master!"

Lou Qianxue did not mind it. Her red lips slightly curled, and her black eyes emitted confidence and radiance. She mysteriously smiled. "Sister Xingchen, it will not be long before I'll be able to perfect my elementary force. At that time, I can leave the city lord's mansion and go look for my mother."

As she smiled, she changed the topic and gave Lou Xingchen another serious look. "Sister Xingchen, don't worry about me. You still have a month before you'll participate in Liuyun Prefecture's Prefecture house competition. During this period of time, you definitely cannot relax. You have to practice the [Mountain River Sword Technique] well. I believe by that time, you'll definitely be able to make use of this profound martial art to shine and become the focus of others."

Upon hearing this, Lou Xingchen's grasp on her sword became stronger. A wild ambition burned in the bottom of her eyes. "I will! I will definitely win the top spot in the Prefecture competition in one month's time. I'll let everyone know that I am a Phoenix that can soar for nine days!"

Lou Qianxue smiled and nodded. "Yeah, since this is the case, I won't disturb you from cultivating." Finished with her words, Lou Qianxue turned and left.

Behind her, Lou Xingchen, who had been looking at the long sword, suddenly raised her head. Her gaze became dark as she stared at the back fading from her view…

"Sister Xingchen has successfully mastered the [Mountain River Sword Technique]. I should also work hard and try to perfect my elementary force as soon as I can." After Lou Qianxue returned to her residence, she crossed her legs and sat down. She was determined.

In her past life, she had been an orphan. She had also been a member of the national special forces. She was cold, heartless, and decisive in killing. After perishing together with the enemy in her last mission, when she woke up, she found herself as Lou Qianxue.

In this life, she had both of her parents. However, her father was the city lord of Qingyun city. He placed benefits above all and only cared about people whom he could make use of. Since his daughter could not perfect her elementary force, he was extremely cold to her. To him, it was as if he did not have this daughter.

Only Qianxue's mother had treated her warmly. She had doted on her daughter, protected her, and loved her, regardless of how she was, whether when she was young or when she grew up. She let Qinaxue feel the warmth that she had never felt before in her past life. Her mother was the person she cared the most in this world.

It was a pity that… six years ago, her father did not bother about his wife's objection and married a concubine. It made her mother leave in sadness.

And Lou Xingchen had been an orphan who was brought from outside to accompany her before her mother left. Not only was Lou Xingchen the only person left behind by her mother to accompany her, but her mother had also passed her the [Mountain River Sword Technique] that was not taught to outsiders like Lou Xingchen.

She let Lou Xingchen protect her. Hence, Qianxue had also treated Lou Xingchen as her biological sister. Regardless of any matter, they confided in each other…

Six years ago, Lou Qianxue originally wanted to follow her mother and leave the mansion together. However, her mother had left a message. She didn't allow Qianxue to leave the city lord's mansion before she became an adult. After she reached adulthood, she could decide her future path again…

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Oh well, what can I say about this one? It's not necessarily a bad story per se, but it feels lacking in different aspects tbh. I feel sorry because I truly tried to like it, but I simply couldn't continue reading till the end; and even at some point, I lose the interest to comment on further chapters because I simply didn't understand why the story was going towards that direction (I'm not saying this to discourage the author, so I'll hope if u ever read this, you'll take it in a constructive way and keep working on your craft, fighting!). For those who's considering reading this, lemme tell u some things: 1. If u like ancient chinese themed stories like me/ or stories about cultivation/, you'll see that this one has nothing particularly special; and if u haven't read anything of the kind, then I wouldn't reccomend this one to start, simply because it doesn't have a proper world background, and many aspects about cultivation and marcial arts are taking for granted (or explored pretty lightly), so you probably wouldn't be able to get a fulfilling idea of what the world's story is about. That by itself is an issue, because I think it makes the story less enjoyable and with less deep layers to explore. There are tons of scenes in the story focused on cultivation, fighting, etc., but almost none of them were capable of make me feel excited, or understanding the logic behind the fight. A part of me, simply felt that I was just reading without an specific purpose (and I felt the same while reading about the different weapons, books, etc.). 2. For that same reason, since the world background is weak, I feel like the story development got weaker as well. I'm able to understand if the author wouldn't want to put that much attention to the cultivation aspect (but then, why would u choose that setting, uh?) to focus on something else, for example, idk, romance? But in this case you'll see that story is aiming to be one of those Chinese journeys where the MC gets stronger by herself, and in her own way, she meets the ML and so both paths are supposed to develop together until she's solved her own issues and is ready to be by his side and the ML knows everything and is powerful and blabla, however, in this one... u never reach anything of the kind. Nor the romance (I simply wasn't able to take seriously the MC, nor the ML), nor even the cultivation side of the story are developed enough IMO. 3. There is a poor character development and a weak character's desing. The FL is... idk, odd? She's supposed to have all the powerful skills and all her memories and experience of her previous life, but too many times she seems like a lost child. Too innocent for her own good, then too focused on violence when there's really no need, and even her "hate" doesn't feel real. Idk but tbh I don't see many layers on her, and I just basically imagine her like a mere teenager who's just throwing tantrums here and there. At some point MC becomes too OP and too dangerous as well (not just in a good way). Her powers grow stronger non-stop, but her mind (that wasn't very bright since the beginning) seemed to lose a lot if not her whole past self. Idk but a lot of times I simply imagined her as brat who has no morals (even tho she already has two lifes in her account). The ML is supposed to be the overbearing cold type who's kinda abusive/rude/ruthless at the beginning but then he transforms into the pampering/I-only-have-eyes-for-her/my-woman-is-the-strongest type, lol. But I personally just feel him like an emotionally handicaped person who needs several slaps to be trained (I can't even get mad at him, lol). Anyway, tbh I don't feel much about any character in particular, and that's enought to tell what happened in the character design department. Lastly: IMO the whole point about cultivation stories and chinese journeys (that can be related to revenge, love, etc. or not) is to understand the logic behind the marcial practices, the realms, how they get stronger, how they grow (not just physically but also how they mature emotionally) and so, but in this one I wasn't able to feel that. Even if they're OP characters and our MCs get or will get everything at some point (which I don't really mind, again, I think it can be pretty funny), I think there still should be a logic behind those achievements, but here everything felt too rushed and not explored enough. This story has all the clichés about cultivation stories u could ever think (I do think the typical formula can be enjoyable it it's well written) and even added romance in between, but despite that, I wasn't able to connect with it. There are some paragraphs that are weirdly written and some words choices are odd as well that makes u wonder what the author was trying to say. This story definitely required more of writing time and probably a script breakdown. There are a lot of good elements to make a good story there, but I feel like it requieres a lot of editing first. Sorry for not being able to connect with your story, author, but if u release something else I'll def give it a try. Good luck. (:

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