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Soul Land 3: Legend of the Jade Emperor

作者: IHaveNthToDo
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A man is transmigrated in Douluo Dalu 3 world with the powers of Okhwang from God of Highschool. First novel, please cut me some slack. Trying to improve.

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Vahn was an atypical youth. Due to a rare mutation, his blood had the potential to target and attack ailments within the human body. Touted as a universal cure, people had elevated his status above the norm and given him the classification "Panacea". In the media, he was hailed as a great hero who would usher in a new era or human wellness. However, behind the scenes things weren't so bright. Being a unique individual, Vahn spent his entire youth locked up in a lab with various scientists and research teams using his body and blood to perform endless amounts of experiments. The only solace in his suffering was the various anime and manga made available to him between experiments. He often imagined himself as the protagonist in a world of his own, finally in control of his own destiny. For years he nurtured this desire, until at the age of 14 he died when an organization had tried to kidnap him from the lab... "Finally, I don't have to suffer anymore..." This was Vahn's last thought as he faded into the endless black abyss... "You poor soul." Author's Note: If you would like to support the author and the team behind EPIC and future projects, feel free to check out libraryofakasha.com. There, you can find extra chapters and several other novels posted by myself and a few people from Discord. Cover by Sinlaire, Edited by Frozen: https://www.deviantart.com/sinlaire https://discord.gg/Jwa8PKh New Patreon~! https://www.patreon.com/user?u=14397149 This is a work of fiction that draws heavily upon the original source material of Danmachi. Please support the official release and know I claim no ownership or credit regarding the existence of pre-existing characters or content.

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0 :Auxiliary Volume
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2 :We at Shrek bois
3 :Star Luo Gang
4 :皇玉和古月娜

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In my opinion, there is not much point in having an "MC" who has not read the two novels / stories, and who has no idea of ​​the power he has or the world he is in, as the "MC" is now It is known how the story will unfold, the actions of the "MC" become a little predictable, which makes him boring. - More interesting, or better, would have been if the "MC" knew the power he had, and the world he was in, because he could take advantage of several opportunities that would benefit him, I think his actions would not be as predictable, since at Having knowledge, he would develop various plans, which would make his career interesting. - Instead of the third eye granting you an overwhelming power so suddenly and using another type of energy, it would have been better if it was your second martial spirit, having two super quality spirits (the eye and the sword), you would have a innate power of 20 !, their third eye and sword if they had the same abilities (the abilities they have would be their basic characteristics) and the two martial spirits can be used at the same time, but the power they can exercise is minimal by the current power of the MC, and the stronger the "MC" becomes, the more power he can use, until he reaches the "god" rank and the MC is if he is super cheated, in addition to his spirit / soul rings, giving additional abilities to his spirits than they originally have. I think this would have been better, in addition to creating a beautiful jade armor, entitled "Jade Emperor". - I don't know what the author thought, but in my opinion it would have been a better integration of the powers of the "Jade Emperor" in the world of Douluo Dalu as I explained,

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Good just good like I'm not a critic or someone that is good a writing sentences so yeahh Writing Quality - well I don't know like I'm not really good at describing things so let's just say its good since ummm I can read it well? Like it has good grammar so it had to be good. Updating Stability - well its 1 chapter/day so its good and ummm don't really know what I should say more to this...... Story Development - well its not rushed so its good right? Yeah its good and ummm the mc does his own thing? Like he's not just some bystander doing nothing and ummm........**** I forgot what im gonna write.........anywayyyy......overall its good but uuuhhh buttt.......****.....yeahhhh just ignore this...... Character Design - well the mc is overpowered so yeahh its good and uhhhh he's mature and calm and mature and.............moving onnn.....uhh the characters are good yeahh good but they hating gu yue soooo its probably not good buttt who cares its not like she's not gonna change right? Yes yep good definitely best yeahhhh annddd uhhhh the other characters umm like they're just side characters and not main characters so no one will probably remember them......anndd I guess this is it? YeH yeah yeah so its done. World Background - well uhh I don't have a single fucking clue and. Uhhh......brain cells. .......its FOOKING GOOD SO ITS FOOJING GRWAT so its should be good and uhhh ****k ummm da **** am I supposed to write here? Like should I just copy paste the sypnosis? Yeahhhh I should...... SYPNOSIS - First novel, please cut me some slack. Trying to improve. So is that good? Its probably is so its good.....and uhh bye I guess? Overall - well its fucking good so u should read it I guess so yeah read it and suck it . .. Wait what? Uhhh. Ignore tthisssss🔜🔜🔜🔜🔝🔝 so yeah I think I did a good review I think? Yeahh......

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