Reborn as Asta

It had potential, I waited so long for an Asta SI fanfic but the MC is unrealistic, like he has been learning every day 24/7/365 for 10 years since he was five and learned every profession possible. MC Asta became too OP very early and he learned "Potions", "Breathing TechniqueS", "Unlimited Joints (from Baki)", "Enchantment", etc. Bro the things I was expecting from Fanfic was: 1. Asta learning swordsmanship because he knew he was gonna get swords. (Before Getting Grimoire) and focusing more on his physique (Asta wasted some time trying to "get" magic) 2. Train to sense Ki. (Before Magic Knights Exam, preferably Before Getting Grimoire) 3. Start to infuse Anti-Magic in his body for the power-up mode. (As soon as he got grimoire) 4. Try to talk to his Demon Step-bro (As soon as he gets the grimoire) 5. After that try to master the demon swords, Zetten all that. 6. Get girls and be more mature.

Bro this has potential I have been searching for Asta fanfic a long time So I hope you dont drop it

Does the author seriously want me to believe that even with a system and 10 years of training, Asta still couldn’t beat Yuno in a one-on-one before even joining the Magic Knights? Really? This is exactly the kind of story I dislike the most. It’s like saying Krillin could tie with Goku in his Super Saiyan Blue form. Here’s what happens: the author writes an overpowered (OP) character, then realizes they’ve completely unbalanced the story and decides to "fix" it in the laziest way possible. How? By buffing everyone else. Suddenly, even the old man on the corner knows how to do a Kamehameha and destroy mountains. Problem solved, right? Who cares about power levels or coherent character development, anyway? And to make things worse, the author writes about 50 chapters just to buff the main character (MC), only to have them fight the same NPCs as before, without introducing anything new or interesting to the battles. At most, they make the fights slightly easier to align with the plot. What creativity! What brilliance! This approach shows a complete disregard for the logic and structure of the Black Clover universe. Power levels and character growth are crucial in this world, and ignoring these elements only undermines the story’s integrity.

It's a good read and I never wanted to comment but lost interest just like how I lost interest in the actual Black Clover series. At first it was the long explanation of his status on almost all the chapters and now it's flashbacks, both of which I don't like. pls note, this is just my opinion.

Ask in this story, can you expect that the girls with whom Asta interacts in the canon will be interested in him and be part of his harem or will you add oc girls or girls from other series because if so I recommend this one, it's called Fremy Speeddraw of the serie rokka no yuusha in addition to another alternative that would be that you make Asta learn senjutsu since that is based on natural energy and not the magic that you think

Tiene mucho potencial, y se nota que el autor está mejorando mientras escribe, espero ver muchos más capítulos de este fic ‹________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________>

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Enjoying it so far. Hope you keep going.