mutekishifu

I noticed the author has improved compared to the previous chapters. Positive points He stopped yelling to the world: "I’m a Sword Emperor!" Before, it was almost ridiculous, like going to buy bread at the corner store and introducing yourself: "Hi, I’m XXX, the Sword Emperor. I’d like four loaves of bread." Just imagine: a Kage-level ninja going to a fish market in the Land of Grass — the vendor would be terrified. Similarly, the city guards should show more respect toward the protagonist, especially after he declares himself a Sword Emperor. I didn’t feel even an ounce of respect from them (which is the bare minimum, right?). Reminder Many readers are still complaining about Gino's inexperience. Before, you were exaggerating this aspect so much that it disconnected readers from the story. It’s more acceptable now, but I hope it continues to improve. Also, when people discover he’s a Sword Emperor, there should at least be some surprise or impact. It shouldn’t be as mundane as it was with the Elf. Her reaction felt like she runs into 20 Sword Emperors in every city she visits.

This is a constructive feedback. The author knows how I feel while reading the last chapters: absolute disappointment (the only good part was the Elf). Let me give you an example that matches the narrative level you're presenting here: it's as if Goku, after the Tournament of Power, struggled to deal with two bank robbers armed with rifles. What a challenge, right? Classic Goku, with a power level of 12, couldn't be killed by bullets, let alone a Super Saiyan God. I believe you don't understand the power rankings. A Saint-level character is already as strong as a top-tier S-level adventurer, and more than 90% of talented swordsmen stop here. The title of Sword King is contested by nobles; if you read the novel, you'll see that even the political rivals of the Greyrats fear the Sword King Ghislaine. A Sword Emperor induces panic, being considered a weapon of war. You can't just brush that off. No king sleeps well knowing there's one of those in their city. And a Sword God? It's like a nuclear warhead — a complete calamity. So, seeing a character who is almost at the level of a "warhead" struggling against two nobodies is extremely disappointing. You're insulting the intelligence of all your readers. I challenge you to reread the last 10 chapters with this information in mind and still give this novel more than 3 stars.

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so bored

It's good, but it forces the plot the author wants way too much. Seriously, imagine a user of Observation Haki losing their own sword to a 14-year-old girl! And you really want to tell me he has to negotiate with her after chasing her? There are literally a million other less humiliating ways. I felt dumber just reading that. Seriously, author, please make an effort to think through the situations a bit more. It wouldn’t hurt to try and make things more coherent. In the next chapter, Nami is going to rescue Ace from the execution platform right in front of the three admirals, Garp, and Sengoku because they were 'distracted' fighting Whitebeard. Seriously, this goes beyond any limits

Soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo forced, man! You lost 2 stars for this chapter.

Imagine a guy who should already be close to college but is instead in the same class as third-grade kids. No matter what mental issue he might have, that’s just impossible. The school would have kicked him out ages ago. This completely kills my motivation to keep watching. Seeing the protagonist think he's amazing for beating up kids is just disgusting.