Psionic 100% in marvel

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Not that great, felt like a copy of mob with just different names... there is literally no marvel. Plus the layout is annoying af. The main thing thou is that every time a new character gets introduced the story just gets worse and worse

Good, awsum, plz dont drop it....i was waiting for one like this...................... Good setting and story telling............................,.....

I really hate dense MC’s and this takes that to another level. i get that he spent his first life in a sick bed, but he was definitely dropped on his head in his second life because there’s no way he’s that stupid after 14 years.

Couldn't make it past the first chapter. Writing flow was too jank, character interactions were very weird, and I thought the family was being purposefully dismissive of his superpowers right until the point the MC first thinks about it.

this is just so boring im sorry author but not my cup of tea delete review if you will but this is just bland but some people my like just not me.

Your story is quite good I love how you are not just making the MC jump into the action for no reason although it started getting boring making the chapters feel like filler chapters. But otherwise good work

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the protagonist is very immature and certainly because of the same immaturity he will make many mistakes in the future and if he doesn’t do it, it’s because of the author, but maybe the author can correct this immaturity with some event

definitely a good book but needs some more work on the grammar. spellings good bit the grammar is killing me 😂. I'll do another review when I've caught up with the chapters.

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I won't say to much but it good fanfic

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pues tiene buena pinta jajaja , esperó no lo dejan caer la historia nomás , ojalá allá harén jeje aunque sea un poquito , y. bueno a leer se a dicho nomás jeje

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