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JManM
JManMLv53yr
2021-02-17 05:49

Couldn't make it past the first chapter. Writing flow was too jank, character interactions were very weird, and I thought the family was being purposefully dismissive of his superpowers right until the point the MC first thinks about it.

Psionic 100% in marvel

ClingyDemon
4.0
31 Chs

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JManM
JManMLv5

** Realized I made it into chapter 2

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Datguypi
DatguypiLv13

That would be because this is more likely a poorly done translation with no editing done to it.

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If you feel like giving a review please do! It will help this novel get a ranking. If you give it one star please tell me why, and if you five it five stars tell others what you like about it. Also for the person who puts a summary of the book in the review, “hello, i’ve been expecting you.”

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Aeternabilis
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Not that great, felt like a copy of mob with just different names... there is literally no marvel. Plus the layout is annoying af. The main thing thou is that every time a new character gets introduced the story just gets worse and worse

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Good, awsum, plz dont drop it....i was waiting for one like this...................... Good setting and story telling............................,.....

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I really hate dense MC’s and this takes that to another level. i get that he spent his first life in a sick bed, but he was definitely dropped on his head in his second life because there’s no way he’s that stupid after 14 years.

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this is just so boring im sorry author but not my cup of tea delete review if you will but this is just bland but some people my like just not me.

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Your story is quite good I love how you are not just making the MC jump into the action for no reason although it started getting boring making the chapters feel like filler chapters. But otherwise good work

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