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Oh. My. Fate?!

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Jing He, crown prince of the nine heavens, has to descend to the mortal realm to weather a human life full of vicissitudes. Each event carefully crafted by fate's scribe, Shun Tao, nothing should go wrong. Just that Qiu Ling, king of the dragon race, follows him. Incapable of watching his lover's suffering he intervenes and plunges the carefully scripted plot into chaos, resulting in a fate that none of them ever intended. A slightly humorous cultivation novel with a handsome yandere dragon, a god ready to quit his job by chapter 3 and a god-turned-mortal, who is still blissfully unaware of everything. Well, that's just how fate is ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ You can find the revised version of this novel, as well as OMF's prequel "Romancing the Son of Heaven: The 69 Stratagems of Dragon King Qiu Ling", on my website www.yansusustories.com

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Chapter 1Descending to the Mortal World

"Fate's scribe Shun Tao greets His Majesty Tianjun." Shun Tao cupped his fists, in which he held his latest creation, and bowed in front of the incumbent Tianjun, Rong Su.

Tianjun motioned impatiently for him to get up and bent forward on his throne. "Shun Tao, today, our son will descend into the human world. What awaits him?"

Shun Tao nodded, straightened up and unfurled the scroll of fate he had brought with him. What should the heavenly emperor have asked, if not for the fate of his only son? "To answer Your Majesty: Heaven's son Jing He will be reborn as the mortal Zhong Jing Yi as part of the common people. His mother dies of childbirth thereafter, causing rumors of the boy being cursed to spread in the surrounding villages. Under pressure from the villagers, Zhong Jing Yi has to escape with his father. Before they are able to find a place to stay, his father succumbs to disease. He sends the boy to relatives in the capital, but the group Zhong Jing Yi is traveling with is attacked by bandits. Zhong Jing Yi and the other children are caught and sold into slavery.

After five years of working on the construction of a temple, he is sold to an official's estate, where he stays another five years. There, he falls in love with a servant girl, who seems to reciprocate his feelings. Zhong Jing Yi saves the money to redeem their freedom, but the servant girl steals the savings and elopes with another man.

Zhong Jing Yi is left alone at the official's estate until the fight over the imperial throne intensifies three years later and his master is executed. The official's family loses its status and escapes from the capital with only a few servants.

Zhong Jing Yi remains alone once again. He isn't able to find a new master and has to eke out a living as a beggar. After the new emperor is crowned, Jing Yi is chased out of the capital with the other paupers. He tries to seek refuge at a temple, but is refused admittance and has to roam the land on his own.

In his years on the road, he contracts a disease and finally dies alone and in pain."

The fate's scribe Shun Tao coiled his creation and looked up contentedly at the heavenly emperor. With this fate, he had excelled himself! If crown prince Jing He couldn't gain experience in this mortal life, then he would never be able to. Destitution, unrequited love, betrayal, loneliness, sickness, old age, death … What more could be asked of one life?

Tianjun Rong Su nodded slowly. "This is indeed a trial worthy of his station. I trust that there won't be any problems."

"Of course." Shun Tao bowed and left the throne room at the emperor's cue. He could by no stretch of imagination picture how anything could go wrong.

Well, sometimes even fate's scribe lacks in imagination.

Dragon king Qiu Ling watched, as crown prince Jing He drank the water from the river of forgetfulness and slowly closed his eyes. Jing He's soul separated from his body and descended to the human world.

"Qiang Wei, Yi Zan. Guard his immortal body, until he returns from his trial. Nobody is allowed to approach him. If any of the demons appear …" He shook his head and stood up. There was no reason to waste words.

"As per your order, Longjun." The two men bowed and took their posts beside Jing He's bed.

Qiu Ling nodded and stepped up to Jing He. He extended his hand, brushed back his black hair and smiled. "We'll see each other again in the human world." For a moment it looked as if Jing He smiled, but of course, nothing of the like happened. His soul had already left his body.

Qiu Ling examined the familiar face for a little longer, then he followed Jing He's soul into the mortal world. His path led him to a rural village. Thatched huts crowded around a square of bare soil, in which the traces of the villagers were carved. Nobody could be seen aside from one woman, who fetched water from a well at the square's edge and returned to one of the houses.

Qiu Ling remained in the quiet darkness and smiled. The fate's scribe Shun Tao had let him restart in this world. This should be the night in which Jing He's new life began. Qiu Ling concealed his body and followed the traces of Jing He's soul to the sole illuminated window. He extended the hand to the paper, that masked the opening and applied his magic. Slowly the room behind presented itself: The young woman, who had fetched the water just now, poured it into a basin and placed it next to a bed. As expected a second woman lay inside, who was giving birth to a child. Or rather: She tried to give birth.

Qiu Ling's heart beat faster. This was definitely the body Jing He would occupy for the length of his mortal life. Nothing could happen at his birth! He looked around, but no physician or midwife could be seen.

A woman's scream broke the silence. Qiu Ling turned to the window again. He couldn't permit Jing He to be in danger. He waved his hand and the dark clothing from the nine heavens transformed into a daoist cultivator's robe. Didn't all daoists perform good deeds? Surely, the two women wouldn't find it strange, if he offered his help.

He hurried to the door and knocked, just as inside another scream rang out. He waited impatiently, but apparently, the women hadn't heard him. He knocked again, louder this time, and, sure enough, steps approached the door.

The woman — the Zhong's neighbor — could find something far better to do than opening the door at this time. Madam Zhong had been in labor for a fairly long time, but the child still wasn't born. Obviously, something was wrong. Who knocked at the door in such a moment? Mister Zhong would certainly storm right into the house, if he had brought the physician.

Disgruntled, she went and opened the door, just to freeze at once. Her incredulous gaze astonished Qiu Ling, but he didn't react to it, and instead clasped his hands and bowed.

"Miss. I was on my way to town when I heard the screams of a woman. Might you need my help?"

The young woman didn't know what to say. The man in front of the door might have worn a cultivator's robe, but he looked the part by no means at all. His face made her forget the struggle and danger of the previous hours, that still hadn't passed.

"Miss?" Qiu Ling raised his head. He couldn't understand what the woman was waiting for. "Let me help." Ignoring her, he stepped inside, closed the door and hurried to the bed. He took Madam Zhong's arm and felt for her pulse. It was weak. She had obviously lost quite a bit of blood. Something had really gone wrong.

Qiu Ling placed his hand on her abdomen and felt around for the child. His face lost all color. Jing He's mortal body had turned around. Even with a physician's aid, it would be hard for mere humans to save both lives.

Qiu Ling closed his eyes and sighed in relief. He had truly made the right decision with checking on Jing He. With his magic, it was child's play to save him and even his mother still had a chance at living. Qiu Ling looked at the other woman, who stood behind him and waited for an opportunity to see his face again. He needed to get rid of her.

"Please, be so kind and fetch a little more water, Miss." He bowed again and pointed at the door when she didn't react.

The woman eyed him entranced until his motion pulled her out of her thoughts. Only then and just reluctantly did she disengage herself from his sight and went outside. Qiu Ling didn't waste any time. He turned around, sat at the bedside and placed his hand on the woman's body again. His magic penetrated her, found the child's form and slowly turned it around. Hardly had he withdrawn his hand, did the other woman return with another bucket of water.

Qiu Ling turned to look at her and nodded. "Please, be so kind and heat it up." He only waited until she nodded, then turned back towards Jing He's human mother. He couldn't do more for her. Everything else would depend on —

Before he had time to finish the thought, the woman took his arm, her grip surprisingly firm. "Daoist immortal … Are you here because of the child?"

Qiu Ling froze but then nodded. She was the woman, who had conceived and carried Jing He for ten months. She would do as much as him for the life of her child.

"Then save him. Whatever happens to me —"

"You'll live, too." He placed his hand above hers, that still gripped his arm, and smiled. "Your son needs you. You'll have to live for him."

Madam Zhong nodded and without another word she bore the suffering until her son saw the light of day.

Qiu Ling picked up the child and gently washed him with the water, the neighbor had heated up. Jing He, Jing He … Wherever your mortal life will lead you, I'll stay at your side and guard you. He looked at the extraneous woman, who didn't have any reason to wait further at the Zhong's house, but still stood next to the bed and stole a glance at him again and again. Madam Zhong also watched him, but it rather seemed as if she was afraid he'd take her newborn son away if she didn't look for even a second.

Qiu Ling passed the neighbor and bent down toward Madam Zhong. He silently put the child into her arms. His gaze lingered at the face, that didn't have much in common with Jing He's immortal form. What would he look like, when he had grown up?

Qiu Ling only hesitated for a moment, then he touched the newborn's forehead. Golden light spread from his fingertip and the image of a dragon appeared on the child's brow. Qiu Ling retracted his hand, smiled and looked into Madam Zhong's eyes. The woman didn't seem surprised, as if she had had a premonition the moment the daoist entered her hut, that he wasn't the person he pretended to be.

Madam Zhong was quite perceptive regarding this matter. Not many people would have been able to tell, that something about this supposed daoist was off. As the dragon race's king Qiu Ling's magic was strong. Nothing could be gleaned from his transformed appearance itself. It was rather his bearing, that had given him away.

Qiu Ling didn't care if she knew or not. Considering that he intended to guard Jing He for the length of his mortal life, there might be future instances when he had to appear in front of his mortal mother. Wasn't it better if she knew from the beginning just how special her child was? "I have to go now. Take care of your son."

The woman nodded. She watched him turn around, but then looked at her child instead. The golden marking gradually faded. As the door closed behind the daoist and her neighbor, who had followed him, nothing could be seen of it anymore.

"My son, how lucky you are. You're blessed by the gods. Your life will surely be free of worries."

Hardly had she spoken the words, when the door opened again and her husband rushed in with the physician, whom he had brought from the city, hot on his heels. "Daifu, Daifu, please have a —" He stopped as he saw his wife with the child in her arms. Both were healthy, but nothing could be seen of the neighbor or any other help.

The physician looked just as astounded. Mister Zhong had called on him late that evening, completely hysterical. He couldn't believe, that everything had just been a bad joke. He silently went over and took the woman's pulse. Everything was alright. She wasn't in any danger, just a little weak. He took the child's pulse, too, but still couldn't find any problems.

"What happened? Is something wrong?" Mister Zhong waited agitated for the examination results.

"Everything is alright. Mother and child are both well." The physician stood up and let his gaze roam over the two of them again. It could even be said, that they were too well. How had they survived the childbirth without any help?

Mister Zhong sighed relieved. "Thank you. Thank you, Daifu."

The physician nodded and with a last glance at the mother and child he went home. He could only suppose, that the two of them must have had unbelievable luck.

Mister Zhong sat at the edge of the bed and grabbed his wife's hand. "I can't believe, that everything went well even without the physician."

Madam Zhong smiled. "A daoist came by and offered his help."

"A daoist?" Mister Zhong raised his brows. There was no daoist sect in the vicinity of their village.

"He said, he is a daoist." Madam Zhong's smile intensified and she touched the place on her son's forehead, where the mark of the dragon had glowed before. "He also said, that he was on his way into town. The gods must have blessed our boy."

The next town was many miles away. Nobody would be on their way there that late at night. One would halt at a village and continue on the next morning. Apart from that, the way from the next sect to town didn't lead through their village or one of the surrounding ones. Whoever the man was, who had saved mother and child, the Zhongs knew, he wasn't a daoist like he had pretended.

"Let us name him Jing Yi. Jing as in spirit and Yi as in righteousness, because he was born through the help of a friendly spirit and he should repay this favor to the people of our empire one day."

Mister Zhong nodded. "Zhong Jing Yi. A good name. Our son shall be named thus." He extended his hand and caressed his child's head. Jing Yi would have a good life and he would one day see to it, that others could also lead a good life.

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Daoist_Angel_Blue
Daoist_Angel_BlueLv14

This is a pretty decent story, but there is one big issue in my point of view. The story doesn’t have a true protagonist. (Maybe very minor spoilers) First off the crown prince Jingyi, he is still a child and one that has no memories of his previous life and is extremely gullible and a bit dumb. But that is to be expected of a normal mortal child. It’s pretty easy to lie to children and stuff like that. Thus he is not the main character. Second is the Dragon King, he seems like a male lead type character, and once again, not a main character or protagonist. He came down to the mortal world to help his lover’s trial. He is often obsessive and quite annoying in a sort of lovable way. He doesn’t really fall into the main character category. The issue is that while the first 50 chapter were enjoyable, I was getting bored. You started introducing more characters or making some characters grow more of a personality. There still wasn’t really a central character that really completed the story. I have read up to chapter 137 and have found myself often skimming chapters more and more. I even started skipping a chapter or two because I was so bored or annoyed. This is a romance story, but it’s very one sided. How is a story that is about two lovers, but have only one. It was funny at first that Jingyi was a baby and everything. But it became just a one sided love. That makes the BL aspect of this story feeling like it dragged. This story seems more like a comedy, rather than a BL story. The comedy is becoming recycled or at least very dragged out. It’s been 137 chapters and no BL... I’m not asking for explicit content or anything, just some progress, cause 0 seems to have happened. The real plot, aka the BL, hasn’t even started. When you think about it, once he dies and regains his memory, all this that happened, really won’t mean much in the end because of the information you provided about Jingyi’s previous life. Honestly, what I’m trying to say is, the story is getting boring. This is a BL story, but it seems that we have to settle with an young child and an obsessive lover from the previous life. (Totally not creepy). Please either move the plot faster or start some different ideas to change up the story please!?

crimson_carnation
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This is one of my most favorite stories I've read, including here, in Novelupdates, or other western novels. This story is refreshingly witty without being overdone, with an appropriate amount of world building and character development. The characters are diverse and each one unique in their personalities and skills; even the side characters are very memorable. We not only see the story of Qiu Ling and Jing He (or Jing Yi, as his mortal form is called) but also of many other characters, all of which is woven together into a fun and coherent whole. The arcs are distinctly separated based on various stages in Jing Yi's life, and we see how Qiu Ling accompanies him while hiding or out in the open, and the various ways Qiu Ling inadvertently thwarts and frustrates the Fate's Scribe, Shun Tao, as he attempts to write out a proper trial for is crown prince. The story is hilarious and light-hearted with tons of fluff between the main characters. I love how the relationship developed between them. Jing Yi's initial reaction to Qiu Ling was very believable, and the way he decided to give Qiu Ling his all without much fuss after accepting him was very satisfying. I love how in both his lives Jing Yi's steadiness and stability perfectly balance Qiu Ling's enthusiasm and troublemaking. I love how serious they both are about each other and how they both complement and bolster each other's strengths and weaknesses. I love how, despite it being a light-hearted story 90% of the time, we still get to see proper character development and the darker sides of a few characters. And as always, seeing Qiu Ling's unique take on everything and his exceedingly funny way of interacting with other characters (especially his mother-in-laws in both the worlds) makes everything so much more better. I'm very thankful that Qiu Ling, though excessively jealous and irresponsible sometimes, supports and encourages Jing Yi in every way he needs, never crossing the line with his forcefulness or pushing the boundaries of what is acceptable. All in all, this is definitely worth the read. I'm very thankful for the Author having crafted this wonderful story that is both written nicely and that is also updated so regularly and consistently. I will forever thank my lucky stars for having stumbles upon this.

ilham111x
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Started reading this novel about a month ago and I'm waiting for daily updates now since it's very addictive and definitely worth reading. What i love about this story or should i say what I'm fascinated about the story is that the words used for the description of the characters, mostly the main characters are so descriptive that i could imagine them as if they are real people around me. Not to mention the surroundings are usually detailed very well that i feel like I'm living with the characters sometimes. Lastly but not the least the interaction between the characters whether they are annoying and egoistic, sweet and fluffy, romantic and steamy, violent and angry, it feels real even though the story has a large content based on cultivation and that does not matter at all as the story has been very interesting so far and i could rule out and conclude that this is one of the most quality content i have come across in this genre. Suggestions: I would suggest not to drag the story too much here and there. For example, some characters are not able to explain themselves even when they are aware of the misunderstandings and the consequences they are put through. This brings unnecessary drama which lengthens the story. The story development should bring a steady feeling instead of bringing the feeling as if time stopped. The other thing I would suggest is to avoid giving too much screen time for minor characters as it lengthens the story with less substance in it. Other than that this story is an amazing story that i would recommend everybody to read. Fantastic writing skills and editing. Wish you the best and hopefully I would see some improvements in the near future :D

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