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Nano in MHA

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What is Nano in MHA

WebNovel で公開されている、ChillPixel369 の作者が書いた Nano in MHA の小説を読んでください。Just a random guy in the world of MHA with nanomachines...

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Just a random guy in the world of MHA with nanomachines

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MegaMacho
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Author fixed an issue with his chapters on the same day I spoke about it, see my other review to see it. If that don't deserve 5 stars, I don't know what does.

ChillPixel369
ChillPixel369作者ChillPixel369

It has come to my attention that you guys didn't like the format in which I was writing. So I will be editing the chapters so that it's much more presentable. Thanks for all the advice people have been giving me. I will try to improve as I continue writing. Hope you have a good day.

MegaMacho
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There is a critical flaw in this fanfic: Paragraphs are so bulky and long that it feels like almost a punch in the face. Author, please, press [Enter] a couple more times. Also, be mindful that speeches and thoughts in the first person must be a paragraph on their own, instead of in the middle of a big one. Example: "Hey, how are you?" Said he as an arrow flew right at his side. 'How is he doing that?' Thought he as he dodged another attack. I really like this fanfic, it can be easily developed. But that paragraph is torture to read through. Edit more your chapters. Especially the first ones which are the worst and also the first thing the readers are gonna see. Not a good first impression. I only bothered pushing through because I'm a hardcore fan of Nano Machine manwha.

ChillPixel369
ChillPixel369作者ChillPixel369

Hi there , Newbie Author here. This is the first time I have ever written something like a full blown story. All support u show me will motivate me to do better. Constructive criticism is appreciated. Have a nice day.

DvD_007
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well I thought this would be interesting, but oh well first the author is already giving the mc way too many powers, yet he still says it's quality over quantity. like just nano and his inborn quirk(telekinesis) is more than enough to dominate mha. but author is giving him every physic power possible mind control, pyrokineses, telepathy and much more. also he's giving him multiple quirks, and the mc is also a cultivator. at this point he might as well be all for one. The grammar is somewhat ok, but the author does use words like "u" instead of "you". also mc has no personality at all, feels like a robot.

Trollface
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Obli790
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Excellent Fanfic, I really liked the fact that the protagonist has such an appealing peculiarity, like telekinesis. I hope he shows his full potential in some other chapter.

ObamaUchiha
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barely even into cannon and all this seems like is another "MC gains a bunch of abilities and OP mc fic" its just boring. summarized this is just another basic wish fufillment nothing too special about it

TheSpiritOfWater
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I liked it, I hope that the fan fiction will not be abandoned and will finish it. (0010101010010101001010100101010100101010101010101010010101010101010101010101001010101)

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Bakuboy
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Regardless of how it is, I'm giving five stars because I wanted to read a story with that 'power'

Francesco90
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Nanomachines, Son. ...................

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