My Sword Reject the Ninja Path[COMPLETE]

just another canon rehash naruto fanfic with another useless mc that doesn't add anything new to the plot just another canon rehash naruto fanfic with another useless mc that doesn't add anything new to the plot

please no harem please no harem .................... ....... ....................

Might as well just read the manga. Hasn’t added anything of value at all to the original it’s just like reading the original through a nobody ninjas point of view.

I made it to chapter 26, but this is literally just a canon rehash with an OC who adds absolutely nothing to the plot. It’s honestly barely even fanfiction since it’s mostly just poorly written summarizing.

The story is just a literal plot explanation from the additional character, MC doesnt influence the world, dont change anything, his teammates are OCs so he would not change the plot, his romance interest is just a mob so stil not even a slight change, lots of text just describing how the characters look like (I believe people know how kakashi or asuma or kurenai look like, just pure graphomanic)

I mean just watch naruto mc make no change att all and alot of the chapters are just naruto with nothing new or aded like the exam fights just stop this is ff not writing naruto story with an extra oc that just watch and tell lame jokes

A very well written story. Great job. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------'

senbonsakura is useless against ryujinjakka or kyoka suigetsu. the author just decided to add symbolism instead of practicality and rationality. 🤦😑

Though late, i'll rate this story anyway. i found a lot of people complaining that our mc didn't change the canon at all. but i disagree. after the chunin arc, there's a lot of things that changed. i mean there's a lot. i wont name it because i don't want to spoil the story. most people probably not even halfway of the story and then starts complaining like a karen. Female heroine won't be a nobody. THIS IS NOT A HAREM.(hint: it's an uzumaki)The romance is good. the history of the world is well made. you need to read until the latest arc to understand it completely, but that's what makes this story interesting. I HIGHLY SUGGEST THAT YOU READ THE STORY FIRST. people's opinions differ from one another. so you may like it or hate it. who knows. all I'm saying is to give this story a chance.

The fanfic is well written and the idea is quite good. However the fic is everything like cannon. Sakura trained a lot more, but was the same useless that appears in cannon, because of the mindset of fangirl, to me is just an excuse, since Rin was also a fangirl in the beginning of Minato’s and was way better than Sakura in the missions. And I personally don’t like Yakumo Kurama at all, so sorry but I can go on.

The story is really good at the start he is not op and able to change major stuff at first so if that is what you are want read it till ch 49 it starts to change, but sadly for the worst the novel drops fast with the mc getting what he wants for no reason other than the writer is god and can have what he wants. He is for no reason alowed to go out for three years no conditions, dosu got stronger like high chu from just from getting a second weapon from where don't know and why is he alive and not killed in trying to summon the 4th don't know, for some reason the platpuss from phines and pherb is found and somehow turned into a ninja which is not how summoning animels work, and last the big secret of his power now goes around say random bleach info exp like souls and hollows and changes the explantion how he got his powers to people each chapter exp it is a bloodline and next time he found some stone tablet when 3 or 4 and gained the power.

The FMC sucks, drop it

I hoped the Author would focus more on the Bleach section of the fanfic, or change the plot of Naruto, but you just changed a few things that have no impact on plot or close to none. Otherwise, I really have to say that's an interesting read for bleach & naruto fans but not original. Hope the Author finishes it, and may it develop your writing.

Great original idea for a fanfic! The author had good grammar, the story is engaging, and original without just being a canon reading. 10/10 keep up the good work man!

I liked the novel, the idea of mixing Bleach with Naruto, although not original, no one did it the way the author did, from what I saw I think the world is characterized very well and the idea of having a ninja who only uses sword, I hope the author continues the work because it's very interesting, along with a great frequency, I hope this novel is more recognized.

One of the best Naruto and Bleach fics I've seen. It took me a while to finish because of school but I ended up doing speed run Now I'll be going to the author's other fics, see you later

I wish there was more stories like this. .................................................. .................................................. ..................................................

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Excellent fic. Waiting for more. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------‐------------------