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2022-12-31 05:19

the author doesn't even go with or understand what they picked for their character they gave them kuramas chakra when he is not kurama or even a jinchiruki and did not even explain how he became a natural sage they just giving the character random power ups with no explanation.

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ArcNemesis
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well I like Solo leveling very much so I want to find a good fanfiction about it and that's when I found this fanfic and when I see the rating is high so I got a high hopes on this but the story development destroying it. It's just simply a wish fulfilment fanfic and the mc playing to be hero. He got so much power from the beginning without even trying. I don't understand why the rating so High that make people took a bite by it but get destroyed when reading it. Writing - 3🌟,I can understand what the story about but I thought it a bit lacking variety. Story development -1🌟,MC get so much power that can make him a god at the very first chapter and MC can't make good use of that power.simply this story is a wish fulfilment story,The romance is a bit lacking and with highly intelligent I think MC is quite stupid. Character design - 2 🌟,I like Yoriichi tsugikuni character and the other characters from SL but the way you make how they act actually disappointed. Updating stability -4🌟, Cause you updated this story well,4 chapter a week is already good. World background -2 🌟, Although I like SL I don't know why because you put so much power in the mc the world background just simply became a play ground for MC. Well that's it for me,To people who talk about being cruel or rude to this criticism I think you should know what the "Criticism " mean first. I can't make a story doesn't make me don't deserve to giving a criticism cause from criticism that someone can learn and know how the other people thinking work about an something. Keep the stability of updating and improve the story development, don't make it too plain.

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