My Mother Told Me

As an author, I do not recommend it, I do it for my own pleasure and do not want to encourage anyone. MC is an asshole, a sadistic asshole. My writing style has many flaws, English is not my first language. Usually, any suggestions and good advice are ignored.

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This is the kind of story that is rarely found in this trash site therefore I consider it a good one. The author is not some politically correct pansy that is too scared to write a truly evil mc so that is always a plus. If you're not ready to read about the incarnation of ruthlessness in an already ruthless setting then I advise you to not even click on this story.

I'm inlove with the MCs personality, honestly it's such a breath of fresh air to have a somewhat logical and somewhat evil MC that has already adapted to the universe he is in.. author I highly suggest you create a Game Of Thrones fanfiction.. I feel like you'd create an amazing story in the GOT world.

its really this novel,yesterday i discover this read the 3 only chapter and serarch for other novel from the author and find a really good novel of the auther called commonwealthand read the 200 episodes in one day.lol GOOD AUTHOR DONT GIVE UP ON THIS NOVEL OR THE COMMONWEALTH NOVEL

He comes to usurp the world bringing destruction and chaos wherever he goes all women love him and he does this all at the teNder age of 5??

I like how ruthless the MC is. To be honest, a good and merciful MC in this series would only die in so many ways. So far I like where the story is going keep it up 🦾.

My mother told me Someday I will buy Galley with good oars Sail to distant shores Stand up on the prow Noble barque I steer Steady course to the haven Hew many foe-men love you story,

Alright, For those who want a strong-willed Mc or Ruthless Mc, This is for you or If you like the Fanfic of "HOLYJOKER" where the Mc is Evil, Manipulator, Ruthless, Selfish then this is for you, But overall this Novel is 10/10 For me Because, this is my cup of tea Question Author-sama ; Will his women betray him or are there some kind of NTR?

Buenísima historia de viking autor eres lo máximo, solo quiero más más más más más más más más más más 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

Writing Quality- 3 Stars Story Development- 4Stars Character Design- 5 Stars Updating Stability- 5 Stars World Background- 5 Stars Writing Quality [ Not much to say here. It is understandable and not complete bullshit, so there's that ] Story Development [ It is going forward and it seems that it could be a good Story, just read it, folks ] Character Design [ I love him, not a naive and innocent Mc but a man that knows what he wants, the way I like it ] Updating Stability [ A Chapter a day keeps the doctor away ] World Background [ The author seems to know his shit but I didn't watch the show for a year so I do not have a promising authority to conclude that ]

This is one of those fics that really belonged to this site, retarated readers, retarted auther, harem, killing, explicit ***, a touch of deus ex machina and as a retarted reader I love it, good job on this novel mate together with the other one, it's like chips that slowly kills off your brain cells but can't stop reading.

Here is my score, independently of the quality of the novel, if you insult and say "I don't give a shit if you are offended" automaticly it deserves the lowest score. I didn't even read this novel and with a author like you, I won't.

I'm really looking forward to this I have read his other book the commonwealth I hope it is just as good and entertaining so far it seems to have the makings of a good novel.

The author is not some politically correct pansy that is too scared to write a truly evil mc so that is always a plus. If you're not ready to read about the incarnation of ruthlessness in an already ruthless setting then I advise you to not even click on this story.

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dude....ur paragraph alignment sucks. in small devices its hard to read and its clustered, especially since u use ellipses and dont separate the dialogues, they are like thoughts. use the ' ' [marks to signify the dialogue and dont write a part of a sentence in a another line]. even ur other bk, the same shit happened. fix it cause even if people are interested u just lose the will to read cause you cant understand. ur common wealth bk was interesting but 4 chps in and I dropped, its hard to read.

What can I say? Well I’ve read it twice already. Very nice work! Good character development, detailed world background and interesting narrative. MC feels real to me, just like any other person with little powers to use. Good job implementing the series knowledge and self-made storyline. More of a Kingdom Building during Viking age and slice of life instead of constant battles or knowledge seeking. Chapters are entertaining, not short. Grammar is excellent - no typos, no mistakes, though sometimes I wish you could give little briefing to meaning of certain words or idioms. I give it solid 10/10 even tho the rest of chapters aren’t there, cause you’re concentrating on your other novel. Btw you’re second novel is also nice, although I don’t understand Lithuanian history very much. But wars were described plentiful. Anyways, I couldn’t find other vikings novel that good, so this once is definitely must-read

interesting, different than the norm of most fics, but definitly interesting and refreshing. I dont think its everyones pot, but one should definitly try it.

Well i am deeply disapointed. It's not that It's bad, but i feel like watching a remake of vikings with a différent MC at this point. So yeah It's not interesting to see MC win juste like ragnar deed, become jarl Just like ragnar deed. In the end i can't help but ask myself if thé MC being itself make sens since Hé Just feel like a copycat. Where is thé originality ? What's thé point of doing a fanfic if you don t try to take another road to get some where better than thé Web série ? What's thé point of existence of our MC here ?