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My life as a merchant

作者: SuckyDUcky
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What is My life as a merchant

WebNovel で公開されている、SuckyDUcky の作者が書いた My life as a merchant の小説を読んでください。It can be some swearword's here and there . Some adult humor ehm . Suddenly Riku is on a grassfield of what looks like anotherworld he pinches him self on the arm to see if he is dreaming or not . But...

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It can be some swearword's here and there . Some adult humor ehm . Suddenly Riku is on a grassfield of what looks like anotherworld he pinches him self on the arm to see if he is dreaming or not . But he felt the pain of the pinch.

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I usually like stories like the one you are trying to write. But one chapter in I can't get past your bad grammar. Also it just seems too...... cliche to me. I applaud you for trying but you might need to go back and try again. Good luck .

Snax
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The English grammar is kinda bad but not too bad. Storyline pretty decent this far . I like the build up I can definitely see what you are going for! Take more time on editing!!

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Snax
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Your story is pretty good now , grammar and editing is eeeaah still kinda bad . Take you time on editing dude! Comedy is pretty funny too haha love it this far!

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