am I doing this fic right?

Hey guys I've been curious for an hour, but am I doing this fic right?

I mean I'm trying to be consistent with the interactions, pacing, and actually using. Henry's quirk(system) but I feel like I am doing something wrong.

Henry is more comedic than action packed, so I think I'm not hitting the right balance.

So how should I fix this?

I'm going to continue with writing but I figured I should ask this, so i can actually keep the dream and premise of this series alive.