My Angel system
In old times a boy named Luis had lost his parents at a very tender age, he never even got to know who his parents were. With his parents gone he had to be taken care of by his wicked aunt who hardly fed him once a day, in effort to get food Luis was adviced to steal by a strange book without minding the punishment of burning given to thieves. When Luis was caught he ran into the forest and the villagers including his aunt chased him down with torches. "I think it's best I surrender now" Luis stopped running and was panting now. "I think I can see him!" he heard the village blacksmith shout. He took a little step backwards and down a hole he went. "Noooooo!!!" Luis screamed as he went down the hole, the last thing he saw was a red glowing light and then it was lights out for him. "What happened?" Luis groaned. "Where am I? And why is my body so cold" he said touching his arm" A screen appeard in front of him. [ System revived ] "What?" That was where the true journey began. Now the fate of mankind lies in his hands as he keeps completing tasks and quests to get stronger. Luis keeps getting stronger but the question is: Will he be able to stop Lucifer? Join my discord channel for more info about the novel. https://discord.gg/7DvJCBfvSy Also if you have time, you can check out The Angel System by ECM Manga.
Replays And Corrections
Everyone laughed at Luis' question, they had all come out almost together and had been waiting for Luis to return for the past twenty minutes.
"Were you having a shower in there?" Ella asked.
"Oh," Luis said now he understood why they were all giving him strange stares.
'Did I really take that long?'
But being late wasn't exactly his fault as the demons he was supposed to fight had arrived late.
"No, I ran into a little problem," Luis said, rubbing the back of his head.
"You ran into trouble? Even Dylan didn't get into trouble." Henry said.
"Hey," Dylan complained knowing what he was trying to say.
"You guys should leave him alone, the only thing that matters is that he completed the mission," Monica said.
"I can see you are all back."
The students turned to see Michael behind them with his hands crossed behind him.
"And everyone completed their missions too." He added.
"Yeah, are we free to go now?" Ella asked.