My Angel system
In old times a boy named Luis had lost his parents at a very tender age, he never even got to know who his parents were. With his parents gone he had to be taken care of by his wicked aunt who hardly fed him once a day, in effort to get food Luis was adviced to steal by a strange book without minding the punishment of burning given to thieves. When Luis was caught he ran into the forest and the villagers including his aunt chased him down with torches. "I think it's best I surrender now" Luis stopped running and was panting now. "I think I can see him!" he heard the village blacksmith shout. He took a little step backwards and down a hole he went. "Noooooo!!!" Luis screamed as he went down the hole, the last thing he saw was a red glowing light and then it was lights out for him. "What happened?" Luis groaned. "Where am I? And why is my body so cold" he said touching his arm" A screen appeard in front of him. [ System revived ] "What?" That was where the true journey began. Now the fate of mankind lies in his hands as he keeps completing tasks and quests to get stronger. Luis keeps getting stronger but the question is: Will he be able to stop Lucifer? Join my discord channel for more info about the novel. https://discord.gg/7DvJCBfvSy Also if you have time, you can check out The Angel System by ECM Manga.
In The VR World With Nova (02)
"Yeah it's me, you can make yourself look any way you want in here," Luis said.
"And you decided to make yourself look like that." She said, looking at him from head to toe.
"What's wrong with it? I only changed the style and color of my hair." Luis said.
"And yet you don't know how much that changes how you look," Nova said.
"You think my choice of appearance is weird, wait till you see what Ace did with his character," Luis said.
"You mean wise wind," Nova said as she turned to her tab and clicked a button that quickly brought up the 3D image of Ace's character.
"How did…."
"I've been in a VR game before, my only surprise here is that I didn't expect to be brought to an endless white space." She said before turning her gaze back to the 3D image of wise wind. "His character design is kind of cool."
"Really?"
"But I'm not going to use it." She said as the 3D image disappeared.
"Wait, you can't just change his designs," Luis said.