Lord of Business

Review of my own novel. Business and money orientated, there will be magic later in the story which will be related to money but it will be introduced much later. Harem will be there but slow progressing so that it doesn't ruin the story instead enhances. it. Even if he gets a Harem there will be only three things he will care most about money, Father and Mother. Nothing else will be in his mind. So yeah hope you like it

so far, this story has thoroughly entertained me, and I can't wait to see where the story goes in the future. Unfortunately, at the time of reviewing this, it has only one chapter.

Okay the story is good but you have writing errors. I'm in school majoring in creative writing and the one thing they taught me was to describe EVERYTHING. Describe what your character is feeling, don't just tell us. We have to feel what he's feeling, experiencing, we have see what he she's. This is a hard task it was hard for me at first too but trust me, try it. You should definitely go back to the beginning and start editing as well. There are some words and sentences that shouldn't be there. Take your time editing.

The story outline itself was very interesting. will get you hooked instantly at first chapter. The character naming as well was quite unique. would really be interested for coming more updates

I will like to see how the story unfolds .....the concept is interesting...makes me curious ...the book is in my library . Keep up author !

A very good novel with a very good writing style. Work has a lot of potential, can't say much as there are only 6 at the moment. But i like it and I hope the author takes this novel seriously!

This story is nothing short of entertaining. It has some nice flow and progression. Good writing. Good development. And the world background is also present.

Nice start! Can't wait to see more. Maybe the MC will use his knowledge of the future to get rich.

The story of business and growing I think remains me of the novel 12 hours after. Both this and that, if you read will help you get an idea of how a real business runs. Though this one is still an infant, it will surely rise just like its genre of businesses. Anyway, its writing style and plot are great and good to invest in. Great book keep it up

Hey author, I'll say, I can't deduce how good the story is with just two chapters, but so far, so good. I like the anti-hero feel your protagonist feels, though I cannot say if he's a good guy or a bad guy in the end. But your story emits potential, that's all I want to say for now. When your story reaches 20 chapters, dm me, and I'll delete this and leave a fresh, new, even more awesome review! Until then, keep writing, and good luck in your journey!

Though it may be early, the story is dark and gripping! After dealing with a lifetime of sadness and misfortune our MC is given a second chance at life. Now he dedicates his new life to becoming as rich as possible in order to give his parents a better life.I look forward to contuing the story as his dark past unravels and we get to see his possible redemption.

The story has a catching plot. It makes the reader wonder how will the author incorporate magic in business haha and this is one leaning in revenge! Writing quality is good, author is descriptive and uses word easier to understand for non english speakers. Only two chapters but it's already a good read! Good job, author!👏👏

The storyline theme is unique.Overall the chapters indicate family drama and the time travel . How the protagonist will ready to take revenge the people who wrong him . Waiting for further chapters so we can get the whole picture what was happened in the past.

one chapter is about 100 chapters too few I look forward to reading more

this is good work. Business is essential after all.Author, more chapters please.

So far with what I have read, I would say that this story has the potential of doing well. I actually love it and can't wait for more chapters to be released

I appreciate the author's focus on the protagonist's strong bond with his parents. It adds a touch of warmth and relatability to the story, as readers can easily connect with the desire to provide for and make their loved ones happy. This emotional connection serves as a driving force for the protagonist's ambitions, making the reader root for his success.

Dude your story is just amazing I have just read first chapter of your novel and I am feeling connected to your novel may be because of parental love in your story because we Indians really love our parents a lot but your story telling is also amazing this is rare for me to feel connected to a story just after reading some initial chapters so keep it bro .

I really like how entertaining it is. I have never liked the goody two shoes type of MCs so this is truly my cup of tea. I am looking forward to more chapters!

Trust me when I say the story is great a few mistakes in writing here and there but the story in itself is amazing! I enjoyed reading it apart from a few things. Just try explaining more! and everything else will be perfect! <3