Item: Lord of Business
Rating: 5
Author: LordShivaStories

LordShivaStoriesAuthor1yr

2023-08-17 17:12

Review of my own novel. Business and money orientated, there will be magic later in the story which will be related to money but it will be introduced much later. Harem will be there but slow progressing so that it doesn't ruin the story instead enhances. it. Even if he gets a Harem there will be only three things he will care most about money, Father and Mother. Nothing else will be in his mind. So yeah hope you like it

Lord of Business

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