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superAyan
superAyanLv131yr
2023-08-19 07:12

The story has a catching plot. It makes the reader wonder how will the author incorporate magic in business haha and this is one leaning in revenge! Writing quality is good, author is descriptive and uses word easier to understand for non english speakers. Only two chapters but it's already a good read! Good job, author!👏👏

Lord of Business

LordShivaStories
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6 Chs

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LordShivaStories
LordShivaStoriesAuthor

thank you

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LordShivaStories
LordShivaStoriesAuthor

Review of my own novel. Business and money orientated, there will be magic later in the story which will be related to money but it will be introduced much later. Harem will be there but slow progressing so that it doesn't ruin the story instead enhances. it. Even if he gets a Harem there will be only three things he will care most about money, Father and Mother. Nothing else will be in his mind. So yeah hope you like it

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Arsenalhole6ty9
Arsenalhole6ty9Lv2

so far, this story has thoroughly entertained me, and I can't wait to see where the story goes in the future. Unfortunately, at the time of reviewing this, it has only one chapter.

1yr
GinMonroe
GinMonroeLv1

Okay the story is good but you have writing errors. I'm in school majoring in creative writing and the one thing they taught me was to describe EVERYTHING. Describe what your character is feeling, don't just tell us. We have to feel what he's feeling, experiencing, we have see what he she's. This is a hard task it was hard for me at first too but trust me, try it. You should definitely go back to the beginning and start editing as well. There are some words and sentences that shouldn't be there. Take your time editing.

1yr
MelvinDash
MelvinDashLv11

The story outline itself was very interesting. will get you hooked instantly at first chapter. The character naming as well was quite unique. would really be interested for coming more updates

1yr
redlady
redladyLv1

I will like to see how the story unfolds .....the concept is interesting...makes me curious ...the book is in my library . Keep up author !

1yr
Sinadin_2ndth
Sinadin_2ndthLv3

A very good novel with a very good writing style. Work has a lot of potential, can't say much as there are only 6 at the moment. But i like it and I hope the author takes this novel seriously!

1yr
TheSuccessor
TheSuccessorLv2

This story is nothing short of entertaining. It has some nice flow and progression. Good writing. Good development. And the world background is also present.

1yr
Writing_Warlock
Writing_WarlockLv2

Nice start! Can't wait to see more. Maybe the MC will use his knowledge of the future to get rich.

1yr
Ninestar619_5803
Ninestar619_5803Lv4

The story of business and growing I think remains me of the novel 12 hours after. Both this and that, if you read will help you get an idea of how a real business runs. Though this one is still an infant, it will surely rise just like its genre of businesses. Anyway, its writing style and plot are great and good to invest in. Great book keep it up

1yr
daylightmoon123445
daylightmoon123445Lv1

Hey author, I'll say, I can't deduce how good the story is with just two chapters, but so far, so good. I like the anti-hero feel your protagonist feels, though I cannot say if he's a good guy or a bad guy in the end. But your story emits potential, that's all I want to say for now. When your story reaches 20 chapters, dm me, and I'll delete this and leave a fresh, new, even more awesome review! Until then, keep writing, and good luck in your journey!

1yr
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