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Loneliness System

Nightmare. The world where monsters dwell in every corner, a place completely inhospitable to humans. The sun only comes up for 6 hours a day, while the rest of the time the sky is cloaked in dim rouge rays of light emanating from the moon. Join Alban as he starts off as a human and evolves into a terror that strikes dread into the very world itself. ------------------------------------------------------------------- Hey, I'm new at writing and thought I'd take a shot at it. Native English speaker, so if you spot any typos, feel free to admonish me. I’ll try to fix them before burying myself in tons of chapters. -- Warning, right now update rates will be VERY inconsistent! I took some time off to plan what I actually want to do in this book, so right now I’m trying my best to write enough chapters to have a stable release rate. I’m a student, so that’s the kind of situation I’m in...thanks for your understanding! — Like it? Add it to your collection and follow my progress! I try to post 5 chapters everyday, but I may not always be able to. Regardless, I hope you enjoy my story as it develops. P.S: Leave a review please, it helps!

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An announcement

Hey guys, the next five chapters are coming up soon! I just wanted to address a few issues I've seen with my story before embarking down the wrong path.

1. The system is too convoluted:

I haven't defined the system very well, but sharing my base idea will spoil the story a bit. First, I think my whole estimation system is a bit bunk...I want to show the results of the stats through my writing rather than just put it on your screen. What's more, I don't feel like I've shown what the system can do very well. I'll list the available functions for now.

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Inventory

Skills

Status Screen

Quests + Quest Draw

Acknowledgement and Titles

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I'll try and do a better job at showing these functions as the story goes on. I will continue to try and improve my writing skills as the chapters progress. Thank you for spending your time reading the beginning of this story of mine. The next chapters will start being released about an hour or two from now! See you guys then!