In the DC world with Marvel Chat Group.

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at ch 37 rn. it's kinda true this had group chat system. but it was never explored that much, and the story is focusing more on mc's daily life rather than group chat. so, the title kinda misleading a little bit. there are some confusing words sometimes and the translation also getting worse at 25ish chapter. I put massive importance on writing because it's the novel, hence the average rating

I won't say much about the story until, it's only 20 chapters. But I like that the main character is an intriguing, perceptive and suspicious person. I hope it stays that way. PS: Many people ask about the original name of the story "American Comics: Opening Guidance Batman"

A really good translation but really bad story. I couldn't get past the beginning with Bruce acting like a girl being ignored by her crush. Then the asking some deep question of life. I can already foresee many young masters and masteresses chasing after the MC. lol

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overall an ok story that suffers greatly from it's very raw and mostly stiff translation that makes it seem like I'm reading something from someone who doesn't know English

Bad grammar and poor translation is the Bane of this fic, otherwise the concept and execution is solid.

i love the book so far 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Writing Quality: Translation quality is actually good. My issue is, it feels like there is the veneer of something here but no real substance. Stability of Updates: No idea, I'm late to the party! Story Development: So so. Character Design: So so. World Background: So so

where did my system go??? 120chapters in and I dropped. mc rarely makes a appearances...

This might be the single best fanfic I’ve ever read. It feels like something that could actually happen in the series. The author captures every character so vividly that it feels like it was written by Batman.

One of my favorites. I recommend it to everyone to give it a try

As a reader, I approached this fanfic with low expectations. But to my surprise, I found it to be a true masterpiece. The protagonist, storyline, plot, and characters are all incredibly well-written and compelling. There are numerous golden moments throughout the fanfic that kept me engaged and eager to read more. The protagonist, in particular, stands out as a complex and fully-realized character, with strengths, weaknesses, and a deep understanding of the world around them. One of my favorite quotes from the protagonist is, "You may believe that you are solely yourself, but in reality, you are a reflection of the countless people who have influenced you. Your parents, teachers, classmates, and friends have all played a role in shaping you and their influence on you will always be a part of you. In a society, no one can truly be independent. Your personality is formed by the people and experiences you encounter. Whether their impact is 50% or 99% or 100% from a higher power, it doesn't change the fact that it cannot be 0. As long as it is not zero, the exact percentage is insignificant." This line demonstrates a level of philosophical inquiry that I haven't seen in many fanfics. Overall, this fanfic surpassed my expectations and left a lasting impression on me as a reader. I highly recommend it to anyone looking for a well-crafted story with complex characters and thought-provoking themes. It's clear that the author put a lot of time and effort into crafting a story that is both entertaining and meaningful, and I can't wait to see what they come up with next.

This was so much fun to read (It said the review have to be at least 140 characters so for the rest I’m just gonna use emojis until it’s hundred forty characters) 🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷

the story is superrrr slow, the story is about everyone but the mc which makes it super boring at times. in the 89 chapters mc basically did nothing in dc world its mostly the story of gangs and mc sometimes get mentioned that he is mater mind behind some things. in the marvel world initially it was slightly intriguing later it became a story of matt(dare devil) then spider man then tony stark. mc is getting almost no screen time, i find it very difficult to rate it high.

good gramer everyone spells words wrong sometimes

Alguien subió 3200 capítulos, aunque no se que tan bien estarán. 👍.......................................................................................................

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