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I Won’t Waste This Chance (Dropped)

John Fan wakes up only to find he has returned to the past after almost stabbing his mom thinking she was an intruder! After clearing up the misunderstanding John decides that maybe he should take this chance given to him by the horns and find happiness not only for himself but those around him. ———————————————— I also ask for constructive criticism. This is my first time writing and I would enjoy all the help I can get. I plan to use this novel as an outlet for my boredom in quarantine for both my enjoyment. So don’t expect a steady upload speed.

Haven_of_books · 現実
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8 Chs

A embarrassing memory

"JOHN WAIT UP BRO!"

John then looks with interest over his shoulder only to freeze up.

"FATTY!" He exclaims in excitement

The two young men then stare at each other for a good second both with crazy grins upon their face.

*CLAP*

These two young men then go with a set of complicated but impressive hand movements with extreme fluidity.

"Brother Fan, I was shocked to see you walking away without waiting for poor old me." The fatty then exclaims wretchedly looking at John for compensation.

"Who waits for who again?" John shoots a snide remark at this fatty.

The fatty then snickers and speeds up to meet his pace.

"So brother Fan are you going to ask out Ying Yue?" Prods the fatty curious at his brothers decision

'Ying Yue?' He thinks trying to remember who this was.

*flashback*

"SISTER YUE WILL YOU GO OUT WITH ME" exclaims John with all the passion he can muster.

"No, why would I? Your lame and have average grades, you hang out with a bunch of perverted weirdos, especially that fatty. How do you even deal with him, ew." She says lashing out at John Fan

"Plus I already have a boyfriend, you are honestly dumb to think that someone like me is single." She dumbly says to him as if it's the most natural thing in the world.

"Honestly it was so obvious you liked me it was sad, I only hung with you because it was refreshing to use you as a money bag." She says laughing at how pitiful she found this boy.

All John can do is just stand there feeling embarrassment and shame along with anger.

"Oh looks like John got shut down hard" one of the students who was around whispered to himself leading to everyone gossiping.

"Yeah, sister Yue already had a boyfriend, how could he miss such an important fact?"

"Just how dumb can you be?"

All John could feel was shame, he could not even find the strength to walk away. The amount of emotional turmoil he was going through almost lead him to tears.

He then with his head down and fists clenched in frustration walked away feeling a part of himself also being left behind.

Once him he then stayed home for about a week in self pity.

*flashback end*

"Oi, brother you alive?"

Snapping awake he smacks away a fat meaty hand which was previously waving in front of him.

"Yeah just thinking of getting a little extra something for lunch." he says slightly embarrassed remembering one of his greatest failures.

"Hmmmmm sure." Fatty says giggling to himself 'probably thinking about love'

The two then step into a store and buy some snacks.

"My money...." says a dejected and sad fatty as he walks out of the store snacks in hand.

"Your fault for challenging yours truly" John exclaims proud of his overwhelming show of dominance in rock, papers, scissors.

"Brother you are far to shameless!" Fatty exclaims in a pained expression.

"Says the fatty." John harrumphs giving fatty a side glance.