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I can't use chakra

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What is I can't use chakra

WebNovel で公開されている、Old_Monster の作者が書いた I can't use chakra の小説を読んでください。Kira, who was killed by a truck, was reincarnated in the Naruto world.However, instead of a system or other cheats, he gained a body that did not have chackra network, making it impossible for him to...

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Kira, who was killed by a truck, was reincarnated in the Naruto world. However, instead of a system or other cheats, he gained a body that did not have chackra network, making it impossible for him to use jutsus.

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DemonKingVan
DemonKingVanLv5DemonKingVan

Say you reincarnated- YES To one of your favorite shows Naruto- YES But without a system...-what... None of the clans your familiar with.- thats fine with my knowledge i can overcome it... your family threw you out for being useless..- eh Your useless because you have no charka- are you f***ing with me naruto without the charka

Old_Monster
Old_Monster作者Old_Monster

Yay! Shameless author here! Well, that's an idea that was in my mind for a while and I thought 'Why not?'. So I started to write to see what it gave and ...here we go! Tsukuyomi !!!

Stronda
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Please don't................ drop........................ this.............................. Fan-Fic...................... ............................................. .................................. ........................................ ...............................

Electez
ElectezLv5Electez

Like it don't drop plz.

Rairaidani
RairaidaniLv13Rairaidani

We have a bit wrong typing and look over at he,she,it please. What about romance? Mono or Poly? I prefer harem, but dont make harem so fast that feels like it a finction. And despite all i said i love ur work dude!!

musti48
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continuation.xddd...............................................................................................................................

gamer31
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The book is good, the plot is interesting, and the idea of no chakra is original. I also like the direction the harem is going.*****************************Don’t drop.

JManM
JManMLv5JManM

Very poor grammar makes this story very hard to read. Frequent repeats within sentences and misused pronouns. Word choice is basic. Narrative is poor from the exposition. With the absolute minimum characterization given, one would at least think the plot would move fast, but it is a crawl. By the point in the story I gave up I found nothing of interest.

Vilkian
VilkianLv10Vilkian

I personally don't like Naruto that much but this novel really is such a cool idea and I think it's really addicting, so keep up the great work author-sama! I'm rooting for you!! Oh and it would be great if you'd start doing consistent uploads. Well that's all I had to say. teehee~

Naplis
NaplisLv4Naplis

Holla! Are you a fairy tail fun? Do you like juvia? If yes then this is a story for ya! Kira that...... Kira there..... Kira thought... Kira etc .....God damn never I expected to see a crossover like this one... Anyways it has potential but that grammar..... It scares me!

Passerby_Venne
Passerby_VenneLv13Passerby_Venne

Very interesting fanfiction. An mc in Naruto world without chakra? Cool idea. The pace is good. Story wise, It's good. However this novel is not without flaws. The most prominent one in the beginning is the wrong usage of the words 'she, he, herself, himself, her and his'. The grammatical errors do not subside, however that is something that can be forgiven since the story is good. There is one flaw that I found slightly odd. The mc is reincarnated, but he still thinks like, well Sasuke did when he was 12. It's alright that the Mc is more of a introvert, one that doesn't speak often or is simply cold. But when Mc acts bad tempered and moody when people try to be nice to him, he acts like a child. And considering Sasukes past and age it can be forgiven and understood, but Mc is mentally a grownup when he loses his adoptive mother. And should not act like Sasuke. I understand keeping people at arms length since he's afraid of losing people again. But not start throwing fists as soon as someone jokes with him or when someone tries to be kind a he gives a cold answer with a cold look. Dude that's just rude. So I'm split between reading this awesome idea of a story and this annoying childish mc. But that's a personal opinion and everybody that like's original Naruto fanfics should give this a try unless you hate grammatical errors. 6.9/10 stars from me.

Demitius
DemitiusLv4Demitius

This story is messy, not the worst on the site but it could easily be cleaned up with a beta/editor. The Author has a problem with Gender pronoun identification. I can tell that English is not the Authors maiden language with how clunky the sentence structure is. This story also suffers from a bit of Mass Crossover syndrome. Having swords from 3 different anime. This could have been alleviated if he had added them at different points in the story but he gets them all at once its a little hard to read after that. The MC can somehow lift ,at 5 years old, 1200 lbs on each limb even though his body has NO CHACKRA.

SeaVen
SeaVenLv5SeaVen

Has a potetial... BUT ! D author skips TOO much... thats y its world building is so poor and that also affects characters ... very lame but good one 4 a newbie...

xxkazumaxx
xxkazumaxxLv14xxkazumaxx

Has potential but please...minor typo is still acceptable but when the word turn out completely random really make it hard to read...not saying to repair all error but please...

Evilkingjoker
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Good...................................................................................................................................................................................

Waman
WamanLv4Waman

A Original Idea.............................................................................................................Pls don't droop..............................................................................................

kingofgucci
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GodKingTurtle
GodKingTurtleLv4GodKingTurtle

i like this novel but chapters are short and need abit of grammar work some of the ways the author has the sentience is abit weird like the story feels like it just jumping forward to fast and such but its nice so far

Darklobo2
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ElPrimero
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I want more. .............................................. ............ .. . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . .

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