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I can't use chakra
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So if he does not have chakra will he only use his sword and hand??? How will he even get powerfull like that he most have some ki d of power that will help him please can you tell me what it is btw i did not start reading yet but soon im waiting 10 chapters before i start
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Well, let's just say Kira's swords are a little "special." And do not worry, it will certainly be strong.
DarkKnight32:So if he does not have chakra will he only use his sword and hand??? How will he even get powerfull like that he most have some ki d of power that will help him please can you tell me what it is btw i did not start reading yet but soon im waiting 10 chapters before i start
I do not know how you came to the conclusion that the Swords Over Power, since so far I have not spoken any of your skills. But anyway, thanks for the warning.♡
TheodoreBJensen:seriously, dude those swords are cheats. There are so many plot holes in your story that it puts Swiss cheese to shame. My advice is work on the basics, world building and character creation separately then compare and contrast how each would react with each other when put together.
The was enough information to go on to get to that conclusion. A child cannot lift 1200 lb with their physiology, the only way that can occur is with cheats.
Old_Monster:I do not know how you came to the conclusion that the Swords Over Power, since so far I have not spoken any of your skills. But anyway, thanks for the warning.♡
No. The next chapter will explain Kira's physique. I assure you that it has nothing to do with the swords. But your lineage, which you do not yet know about, is a bit special.
TheodoreBJensen:The was enough information to go on to get to that conclusion. A child cannot lift 1200 lb with their physiology, the only way that can occur is with cheats.
I haven't read this yet, but when you say he can't use chakra. Is it can't use chakra as in don't have chakra or have it but don't have the ability to shape it into jutsu? cause if it the former, that just S***. but if latter then just having chakra can still passively boost him to superhuman level. even if he can't mold them and they stay as physical and spiritual energy, training in the physical energy will still give he a tough body and training in spiritual energy can let him process information faster allowing him to keep up with ninja.
MC does not really have chakra. Mc will become extremely powerful, even without chakra, he will have other opportunities. There is something unique about the MC, but as this is a spoiler no one knows yet I can not say. I do not think I'm a good writer, but I think I have some original ideas, so if you want to read great, but if you do not want to I understand.
Supernatural:I haven't read this yet, but when you say he can't use chakra. Is it can't use chakra as in don't have chakra or have it but don't have the ability to shape it into jutsu? cause if it the former, that just S***. but if latter then just having chakra can still passively boost him to superhuman level. even if he can't mold them and they stay as physical and spiritual energy, training in the physical energy will still give he a tough body and training in spiritual energy can let him process information faster allowing him to keep up with ninja.
you know chakra is the lifespan of ninjas yeah cause if he has no chakra then we'll he's dead even civilians have chakra but can't use it
Old_Monster:MC does not really have chakra. Mc will become extremely powerful, even without chakra, he will have other opportunities. There is something unique about the MC, but as this is a spoiler no one knows yet I can not say. I do not think I'm a good writer, but I think I have some original ideas, so if you want to read great, but if you do not want to I understand.