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Naplis1yrコメントhello there author. I have to say, your work is pretty solid. I especially like, how you portrait you OC and how he is slowly rising to power, i really enjoy that he is not perfect and he makes mistakes like a human. Furthermore, his interactions with his master are sometimes funny, sometimes deep and we can clearly see building his character threw them. I hope you have a nice day and thank you for making such a nice read(your imagination is wild 😜)!
Ch 18 Wahy- Naplis1yrに返信 TheFanBoy
Do you know the word selfless?. Its not strange for strong people to go and help the weak ones, in fact people that usually have some kind of power ( strength, money etc) they usually feel like they have the responsibility to do something. Yes, there is the case of getting power to complete personal tasks and do whatever the fuck i want, but you cant forget the other side of the coin, which is being selfless and try to help people the best i can with my abilities
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i dont understand why you are mad.... its fanfic, if you dont like it delete it from your library.
'Easy now, theres no hurry, we have 9 fucking years we can take all the time in the world to climb down this bitch ass mountain..' he managed to climb down for about ten minutes until he lost his grip on the stone wall, he knew he fucked up! SHIT! - Naplis2yrコメント
readers complaining about different things not happening . how they read :
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keep the good work up my friend !. I like your novel and most of all ,i like the research you are doing for your story. Keep it up and have a nice day ^^
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wellll close to none character development ,kinda disappointed but it is wwhat it is .Also , the reason i hate harems is because there is no romance and character development , kinda like what you did in the chapter . I mean in yhe previous chapter , we met kuroka and in the next one we go straight to morning sex. whats the point of romance if the girls have no personality to back it up?. Anyways , have a good day ^^
"Yes~ Young Master~ Kuroka is here. Do you want to have breakfast? Or Morning Kiss? Or… Morning sex?" Kuroka get herself up and sat on top of me while saying that. She put her index finger in front of her mouth and that managed to increase her charm. - Naplis2yrに返信 MarkinBitchs
Dont forget about leg day !!!.2 times, a week .
My ways to be powerful? In my physical training, I could imitate Saitama's training... To increase the results I should multiply the regimen a hundred times, after all... I'm a God, I must have infinite resistance!... I think?... Probably ?... I have no idea, but if that's not the case, then I must look for a way to at least extend that resistance... How can I do that, though? It's simple... This brings me to the next point! - Naplis2yrに返信 iiuminox
Apeiro means infinity , in Greece we say it like this , Άπειρο.
'One more thing , do you mind if I call you Àpeiro it still signifies what you are but since but it rolls off the tongue easier'. - Naplis2yrコメント
thank you for writing your fan fic with your mind, and not with your d*ck!.Anyways , keep it up .!!!!^^
Hi, I have received a complaint about how Izumi is in a dxd world which means that he has to have a harem. I don't know about you guys, but I personally think that Highschool Dxd is a vast world where there is a lot of information missing which I can use for this fanfiction. The author of that story mostly revolved the story around Issei and friends. Second, Immortality, Izumi just received his Dark Matter, to be immortal, he has to literally destroy his body and create a new one with Dark Matter. He's not strong enough to do that yet. Harem? I will once again repeat. Izumi grew up in a modern society where harem was not legal in his old life. Literally, he lived 25 years where being with multiple women is frowned upon and you add 16 years in his new life as a human with almost all the same laws, it's going to be hard to change his views. It would be easier to accept if he was born a devil or fallen angel or any other mythical being, but he was born a human. To have a harem, he will need a lot of convincing from his girlfriend-to-be which is Hori and that will depend on the flow of this story. I didn't choose DxD for its harem, I chose It for its lore and world. If there is going to be a harem, it's going to be in a far future, but, for now, there is no harem. Even then, if there is a harem, there will not be a lot of girls. This ain't a waifu pokemon fanfiction! Also, it's the perfect world for Izumi to power up and become strong. I will stop putting bold characters for system messages and skills because it seems a lot of people can't read it. - Naplis2yrコメントCh 8 Sorcerer's Bane.
- Naplis2yrに返信 crackedskull
you are right my friend
"Oh, crap. I died trying to save an old man and end up dead! Why does it have to be right after I confess her? She hasn't even given me a reply yet. I died a virgin, aaaaahhh!!" - Naplis2yrに返信 The_Odyssean
yes but the courses were way easier then. I mean tobirama doesnt want children that they can boast about their achievements . What he needs are soldiers that are gonna listen to his command so konoha can be victorious on the next war !
Then there was me, the third-best student of the class, surprisingly, not gonna lie… I didn't expect to be in the rankings at all, heck I fully expected to be dead-last, the subjects were legitimately hard, and because of that, I would be forced to read and research for hours to no end just to pass, there was no way Naruto had any of these courses… no way in hell they had to deal with any of this. - Naplis2yrに返信 Juan_don_Carlos
second war was close , and tobirama needed soldiers not kids ...kinda sad
As for the academy itself, the classes were becoming gradually more and more difficult, each week a student or two would just not come back to class, probably meaning they had been dropped from the academy altogether, and how could they not, classes were becoming ridiculously hard to pass, war tactics, taijutsu classes, ninjutsu classes, interrogation classes, pain management where they basically tortured you and taught you how to handle pain, emotion control, genjutsu theory, genjutsu application, and more… Those were just a few of the classes I was seeing now, and when I started the curriculum was that of a normal school, that lasted for about a week, heck I already knew how to walk in walls and water, that's how hard the training was. - Naplis2yrコメント
it does , scholars usually teach it
Her mother's name is Elana Di Vine. She is the heiress of the Elven Di Vine clan. This clan happens to be one of the "noble clans" of the mainland elves. She was to become the clan's head, but she met my father and gave up her position. Since then, she has been living here with my father. As far as I know, she is also a powerful magician and an excellent historian. (AN: I don't know if this exists in The witcher, so I added it) - Naplis2yrコメント
his not her * still keep up the work mate ^^
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pretty nice story till this point ! Will mc have any romantic interest .? I am asking coz you wrote something about his former lover stabbing him in the lung's,and im interested to see if he is gonna let someone in his life again . Also, its kinda nice the way he is trying to be an uncle to Naruto and kinda fails in it :P. hope tou have a nice day and cant wait for more ^^
Ch 21 The Sage - Naplis3yrに返信 Scorpion_Wish
and people dont shot nen and chi left and right ,but here we are .
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