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HP: A New World账

作者: jdbeue
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WebNovel で公開されている、jdbeue の作者が書いた HP: A New World账 の小説を読んでください。He opened his eyes, and saw himself in an entirely new world. It was very familiar to the one he knew in his previous life, but wait! Is this magic? He is going to Hogwarts? Am I in the world of Harry...

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He opened his eyes, and saw himself in an entirely new world. It was very familiar to the one he knew in his previous life, but wait! Is this magic? He is going to Hogwarts? Am I in the world of Harry Potter? ----------------------------------------------------------- For 10 extra chapters: patreon.com/jdbeue Chapter release schedule : 7 chapters per week, one chapter per day Chapter length - 700 words Discord - https://discord.gg/Dpddtatvge

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He got on the bed and pulled her to its middle, roughly enough to make her bounce on it. When he hovered his huge frame on top of her, tears welled up in her beady little eyes and they glittered in the moonlight. “Is my princess crying?...” He cooed and she immediately turned her face to the side because she didn’t want to show him her vulnerability. But he forcefully grabbed her jaw and turned it to face him making her lips to pucker out. He gave her plump lips a tantalizing swipe of his tongue before taking them in a brutal kiss as she helplessly squirmed under him. She moaned as he deepened the kiss, biting and licking as if he couldn’t get enough. Letting go of her lips with a suckling sound, he kneed her legs open and got in between them. Bracing his hands on the either side of her head, he started pepper kissing her jaw, as if he was trying sooth the harsh grip of his fingers. Using one hand he peeled down her top to reveal her naked bosoms because she wasn’t wearing a bra. His breath staggered with lust when he saw her soft swells and the dark pink nipples. Kate tried her best to keep her mouth closed as he trailed his wet lips down her neck, kissed her collarbone and dipped further down. It was all too much for her and she couldn’t take it anymore; So, she decided to do something she thought that she would never have to do in her life – Beg for her dignity. “Please...Quisito p-please stop...d-don’t do this” Kate sobbed, when she felt him kiss the valley between her breasts. He sighed in frustration and looked up to meet her tear-stained face and quivering lips that murmured silent pleas. “Why don’t you just relax and enjoy what I’m giving you like a good girl....” He purred, as he placed a gentle kiss on her exposed throat. “B-but I...don’t want this” “And what makes you think that you have a choice....hmm?” he husked, while nibbling on the spot where her neck met her shoulder. She was so tensed that he could feel her heartbeat against his lips.

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OneAutumLe4f
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Excellent writing , really enjoyed the story telling . Rhe world building in this story is one of the beat ive read so far . Characters are written really well, they are mentally adapt unlike other fan fics where only yhe mc has intelligence. So far a fantastic read

Spirits_everywhere
Spirits_everywhereLv4Spirits_everywhere

Writing Quality: 5 stars This fanfiction contains good language and grammar in general. There are hardly any major mistakes that would disrupt your flow of reading. Each sentence isn't too long nor does it contain many punctuations. It is good and pleasing to read, and I would rate it 4.7 stars, rounding up to 5. Stability of updates: 5 stars So far, it has been 2 per day, but I'm not sure whether the author is planning to continue this pace. Until this fanfic stabilizes, it would remain at 4.5 stars, rounded up to 5 stars. Story development: 4 stars It's interesting so far, but it doesn't really contain anything that stands out amongst everything out there. The introduction and plot so far is pretty generic, but since it wasn't cringely written or anything like that, it scored better than what I would usually give. I would rate it 4.3-4.5 stars, rounded down to 4 stars. Character Design: 4 stars So far, only the main character's design had been revealed, while the side characters like his parents were barely mentioned at all. I know that we should focus more on the main character, but we cannot neglect the interaction between the side characters and our main character too much. We only know that the mc is born in the royal family as their crown prince, but apart from the few descriptions about the mc's goals, ambitions, morals, ethics, type of personality so far, and little to no descriptions about anything else, I would give it a 4.4-4.6 stars, rounded down to 4 stars. World Background: 5 stars This is a magic and knight's world that is based on a Chinese novel, I suppose. Since the main character's name is Chinese and all. So far, the general power system had been revealed, but the character's power level had not been revealed yet. Since this is a magic and knight's world and supposed fanfiction, the world background should be more or less developed by the original author. Though, since I can't accurately judge how this author is going to develop the world background, until more can be said, I would rate this 4.7-4.8 stars. In total: 4.57 stars, rounded up to 4.6 stars. This is a good read with good language, but until more information about how the author is planning to continue this fanfiction can be revealed, this is sadly going to have only a 4.6-star rating.

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Darius_Chromwell
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The story started out decently but you can tell that the author is starting to loose interest already, the chapters have been getting shorter and shorter after around chapter 15. Also I can't help but feel that the reincarnated person in the first chapter isn't the MC but rather his new grandfather, both experimenting on him as a baby and effectively branding him like a slave, I fully expect the grandfather to somehow take over his body by chapter 50 if it makes it that far.

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Momialy
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I really liked it but what I would have liked for the boy to be more cunning and to behave in a somewhat nice way with Draco and the other pure bloods because with his grandfather we don't know

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