Review Detail of Darius_Chromwell in HP: A New World账
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The story started out decently but you can tell that the author is starting to loose interest already, the chapters have been getting shorter and shorter after around chapter 15. Also I can't help but feel that the reincarnated person in the first chapter isn't the MC but rather his new grandfather, both experimenting on him as a baby and effectively branding him like a slave, I fully expect the grandfather to somehow take over his body by chapter 50 if it makes it that far.
HP: A New World账
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no development, only coward mc. didn't hate father or grand father for playing with his life, but became obedient to Grand Father. didn't mentioned anything about wat he learned in his 11 years. did he learned Occlumency? did learned potion brewing? did he have some accidental magic? did managed to control that?. other than he gone to muggle school and he obedient to his grand father cuz he scared of him, nothing mentioned until 11 year old party.
DragoPackMan:no development, only coward mc. didn't hate father or grand father for playing with his life, but became obedient to Grand Father. didn't mentioned anything about wat he learned in his 11 years. did he learned Occlumency? did learned potion brewing? did he have some accidental magic? did managed to control that?. other than he gone to muggle school and he obedient to his grand father cuz he scared of him, nothing mentioned until 11 year old party.