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Harry Potter: Grindelwald's Grandson

作者: NyanTa
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What is Harry Potter: Grindelwald's Grandson

WebNovel で公開されている、NyanTa の作者が書いた Harry Potter: Grindelwald's Grandson の小説を読んでください。The story follows Alaric's, Grindelwald's Grandson, and his sister's time at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry during the events of the original Harry Potter books. Unlike his sister, Alaric ...

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The story follows Alaric's, Grindelwald's Grandson, and his sister's time at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry during the events of the original Harry Potter books. Unlike his sister, Alaric is determined to embrace his family's history and redeem its name, proving that the Dark Arts are much more than a mere tool to harm people. ************************************ Slight AU. Not a reincarnated or transmigrated MC.

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0 :Auxiliary Volume
1 :Before Hogwarts and First-Year
2 :Summer of 1992
3 :Second-Year (1992-1993)
4 :Summer of 1993
5 :Third-Year (1993-1994)

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Vanille2010
Vanille2010Lv14Vanille2010

It really seems like a promising story. I also really like the fact that while not necessarily hating muggle, the mc isn't too fond of them either. As of now, it looks well balanced. So good job and continue your good work.

JuliflylikeanANGEL
JuliflylikeanANGELLv4JuliflylikeanANGEL

OMG. This story is truly magnificent, the language is written fluently and the character design is also top notch. I haven’t read any HP fic before, that just fulfills every good aspect of a story while also giving characters deepness. It feels as if the author is a professional writer, his writing style is just so good. I hope he keeps updating as fast as usually, cause I can’ t get enough of the story.

NyanTa
NyanTa作者NyanTa

=Review as of Chapter 72= Writing quality: I've got some writing experience, mainly from contests I entered as a hobby, so my story has, at least, comprehensible sentence structure and good grammar (There will always be one or two mistakes once in a while, but I usually correct them as soon as a reader points them out). I tried to adapt my writing style to the web novel format, so the earlier chapters are a mix of various styles I tried to implement (Even first-person POV). Despite that, I'm proud to say that I've found a style I'm comfortable writing with, and plan to re-write the earlier twenty or so chapters when I have the time. Stability of Updates: I'm a uni student, so there are weeks where I really don't find the time to write, but otherwise, I release at least four chapters a week, with a minimum of 2000 words per chapter. If I find myself with more free time, the chance of more chapters coming out is quite high. Story Development: I can't say much on this topic without making this review a spoiler, which is not my intention. As of now, I'm currently writing the Third-Year, and considering this is a Small AU, the canon plot has gone haywire a long time ago, although some key elements will remain. Character Design: If you've come here with the intention of reading about a Gary Stu story, then don't waste your time. The main character and his sister (who I consider a sub-main character of sorts) are strong compared to their peers but are still nowhere near the level of powerful wizards. If there's one thing that I could write about forever, is the struggles characters face in order to achieve their objectives, so, again, if you want to read about an extremely overpowered character, don't bother. World Background: There isn't much to say here, only that I add certain parts to the Wizarding World that compliment its original setting, and that I try to cover certain small plot holes not addressed in the books. *Extra* Romance: No-Harem :D (But there's more than one FML).

r3w
r3wLv12r3w

A good story where the MC is a native and acts like one. Lots of promise. Looking forward to what comes next![img=update][img=update][img=update]

llewis1954
llewis1954Lv13llewis1954

Decent story up until the potters are still alive which is a huge part of Harry Potter that really took me out of this FF

streiz
streizLv13streiz

This novel is really fascinating , and I must say, it has truly captivated my imagination. The premise revolves around an original character who transmigrates into the body of none other than Grindelwald's grandson. It's an intriguing concept that instantly piqued my interest. One of the aspects I particularly enjoy about this story is the potential for character development. Witnessing the protagonist navigate his complex situation, adapting to his new identity and the challenges it brings, adds layers of depth to the narrative. Exploring the intricate web of relationships within the Harry Potter universe through a fresh perspective is truly refreshing. However, I must admit that the story does have its drawbacks. The main issue for me lies in the lack of chapters and the slow updates. As an ardent fan of the story, it can be a bit frustrating to eagerly await new chapters, hoping to immerse myself further in this captivating world. Nevertheless, the quality of the writing and the author's dedication to the narrative keep me invested, despite the occasional wait. And lastly, I have an immense fondness for the idea of Fleur Delacour being the love interest of the protagonist in this story. The allure of her character, with her grace, beauty, and enchanting presence, captivates me. I envision a potential romance between Alaric and Fleur that would be filled with undeniable chemistry, tender moments, and a profound connection.

iLeech
iLeechLv4iLeech

This Fanfic was a very pleasant surprise. I came in with low expectations, expecting another Fanfic that can't tell canon from fanon, but my apprehension proved to be pointless. Keep up the hard work. Finding a good HP FF is almost impossible, here or elsewhere.

NyanTa
NyanTa作者NyanTa

Shameless 5 star review. If you have any suggestion you wish to see in the story, leave them on the comments below this post

Mystical_Z
Mystical_ZLv10Mystical_Z

is the sister the love instrest? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Juan_Abud
Juan_AbudLv4Juan_Abud

Yesssir keep it going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

King_silvers
King_silversLv13King_silvers

Author, just wanna check up on you and make sure you have not dropped this book, the potential is immense.😊😊😊

Jethro24
Jethro24Lv4Jethro24

The development of the characters is trash the plots have many plot holes. Why allow her sister to go to Grofindor when she can be with him in slytherin to make sure that future conflicts won’t happen. Don’t excuse that you want her to have the freedom of choice. It’s just basically common sense to go to slytherin with your brother knowing your situation.

Predaotr
PredaotrLv5Predaotr

Other than author forcing plot to stay as close to original as possible which should be impossible (by dumbing down MC for example) its quite nice HP fanfic

Pequin
PequinLv4Pequin

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JustHavinFunReadin
JustHavinFunReadinLv4JustHavinFunReadin

As I was just reminded by the author to write a review, I'm doing so now. I'm not particularly good at this, but I'll try a bit. The MC, Alaric, is not a wimp, and he's smart. Like, actually, really smart. He is maybe slightly overpowered, but not unreasonably so. How else would he fight someone like Moldywart without cheats like Harry has? Oh, yeah! He holds a huge grudge against Voldyshorts because he mentally crippled his dad, understandable. Last but not least (I think), he has a certain amount of mugglephobia, which his twin sister doesn't. Said sister is also a boring and proper lion, and he's a snake with other sane snake friends. Dang it! It wasn't the last point! They're both becoming animagi. That's it! I'm finished! Bye!

Jeril_Master
Jeril_MasterLv2Jeril_Master

Just read this yesterday and what a ride, had me engrossed and excited about what was happening. I would recommend people read it first as you will be encaptured into the story pretty quickly. Only downside atm is the low number of chapters and I can’t wait to read more.

Remero
RemeroLv1Remero

really wanna see alaric be with a slytherin girl they don't get that much love in most fics and someone like flure delacore is soo overused i am tired of it .it would be refrshing and intresting to see him with a slytherin girl like tracy instead of the normal fanfic thing of flure.

NamelessK1ng
NamelessK1ngLv4NamelessK1ng

I really like the general concept of the story and hope that the story will continue for a long time and for the author to finish it.

typicalanimewatchr
typicalanimewatchrLv12typicalanimewatchr

Read the first volume. Writing Quality ✍: 5.0/5 0 above webnovel standards although there are a few misplaced he/she. Overall a good pace and worth to read.

guy_fierry
guy_fierryLv1guy_fierry

i like this read very much keep up the good work

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