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NyanTa
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2023-04-08 15:09

Shameless 5 star review. If you have any suggestion you wish to see in the story, leave them on the comments below this post

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Sparsh_Kumar_1064
Sparsh_Kumar_1064Lv4

Will there be any side character who will not just be an NPC? Or will the MC be the one who carries the story and make it look like every other person is plain stupid, becoming better than every person who has spent countless hours just by existing?

NyanTa
NyanTaAuthor

His sister is, at this point, more proficient than him in potions, herbology and healing magic. But to answer your question, yes. The mc will have his flaws, that will be compensated by his companions.

Sparsh_Kumar_1064:Will there be any side character who will not just be an NPC? Or will the MC be the one who carries the story and make it look like every other person is plain stupid, becoming better than every person who has spent countless hours just by existing?
IsekaiMan1
IsekaiMan1Lv14

lily potter waifu?

Eisgnom
EisgnomLv4

Found the story today. Really like settings with Grindelwald's grandson, you've only just started the story, of course I still hope for many and frequent updates. And if anyone knows a good story with such a setting (Grindelwald's grandson/heir etc.), please write it down.

streiz
streizLv14

I just want to know who will be the love interest author?

NyanTa
NyanTaAuthor

I'll develop Alaric's relationship with the girls I have in mind, then I'll let the readers decide

streiz:I just want to know who will be the love interest author?
Kami_sama666
Kami_sama666Lv4

Please no harem😰

NyanTa:I'll develop Alaric's relationship with the girls I have in mind, then I'll let the readers decide
Sami_Alfoheday
Sami_AlfohedayLv14

are you going with the original storyline or you gonna be Innovative?

Wesley_Hylry
Wesley_HylryLv14

i was hoping on HAREM

NyanTa:I'll develop Alaric's relationship with the girls I have in mind, then I'll let the readers decide
Orion_Ridge
Orion_RidgeLv2

So will it be harem or single fml or 2 fmls?

NyanTa:I'll develop Alaric's relationship with the girls I have in mind, then I'll let the readers decide
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NyanTa
NyanTaAuthor

=Review as of Chapter 72= Writing quality: I've got some writing experience, mainly from contests I entered as a hobby, so my story has, at least, comprehensible sentence structure and good grammar (There will always be one or two mistakes once in a while, but I usually correct them as soon as a reader points them out). I tried to adapt my writing style to the web novel format, so the earlier chapters are a mix of various styles I tried to implement (Even first-person POV). Despite that, I'm proud to say that I've found a style I'm comfortable writing with, and plan to re-write the earlier twenty or so chapters when I have the time. Stability of Updates: I'm a uni student, so there are weeks where I really don't find the time to write, but otherwise, I release at least four chapters a week, with a minimum of 2000 words per chapter. If I find myself with more free time, the chance of more chapters coming out is quite high. Story Development: I can't say much on this topic without making this review a spoiler, which is not my intention. As of now, I'm currently writing the Third-Year, and considering this is a Small AU, the canon plot has gone haywire a long time ago, although some key elements will remain. Character Design: If you've come here with the intention of reading about a Gary Stu story, then don't waste your time. The main character and his sister (who I consider a sub-main character of sorts) are strong compared to their peers but are still nowhere near the level of powerful wizards. If there's one thing that I could write about forever, is the struggles characters face in order to achieve their objectives, so, again, if you want to read about an extremely overpowered character, don't bother. World Background: There isn't much to say here, only that I add certain parts to the Wizarding World that compliment its original setting, and that I try to cover certain small plot holes not addressed in the books. *Extra* Romance: No-Harem :D (But there's more than one FML).

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