Harry Potter: God of Magic

I don't know if anyone wants to read this but here it is. This idea has been stuck in my head so I just wrote it. The story will be slow and I'll try to follow the canon as much as I can. I'm writing this on my phone so don't expect too much.

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I see Kiara, I click.

Being a common person with common morals, I just can't connect with psychotic mc's just like this one, so yah, this ain't for me. But in terms of writing quality and character design, its five stars. Story development is meh, at two stars, too many details are omitted, what is? Read and you'll know, the first few chapters arw enough for you to know. World background at 4 stars, the author incorporated some original ideas into this. Updating is good at fours stars, since it's still to early wether it's consistent or not.

Long chapters and a good read. Long chapters and a good read. Long chapters and a good read. Long chapters and a good read. Long chapters and a good read.

One of the best HP fanfics I've read and executed perfectly! I really hope this story doesn't get dropped! I need like 1000 new chapters ASAP!

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