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2023-02-07 11:01

This is a gem!!! Even though there are not many chapters right now, you should still give it a read. Now on to the review! I really like the way the author blends the magic (magecraft) systems of harry potter and fate, it makes a lot of sense when you look at it, and I can't wait to see how Virgil will use those two magic (magecraft) systems together in hogwarts I can't comment much on the stability of updates right now, but I can say that looking at the current pacing of chapters it will update one a day (not sure) The writing quality of the book is great! I can easily visualise the world that the character are in I have some trouble visualising some of the characters in my mind (like how they look like) but other than that I can say that the characters have a good depth to them! (though I would like more development on the main character) Overall 4.6/5 (Very Good!!!)

Harry Potter: God of Magic

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Grand_Magus_Shafiq
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Character discriptions and personalities are my weakness. Affected by my own peraonality I have it hard to express different ones.

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nathan_playzz
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It is a problem all writers have, so it is completely understandable

Grand_Magus_Shafiq:Character discriptions and personalities are my weakness. Affected by my own peraonality I have it hard to express different ones.
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I don't know if anyone wants to read this but here it is. This idea has been stuck in my head so I just wrote it. The story will be slow and I'll try to follow the canon as much as I can. I'm writing this on my phone so don't expect too much.

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I see Kiara, I click.

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CallmeCyrus0409
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Being a common person with common morals, I just can't connect with psychotic mc's just like this one, so yah, this ain't for me. But in terms of writing quality and character design, its five stars. Story development is meh, at two stars, too many details are omitted, what is? Read and you'll know, the first few chapters arw enough for you to know. World background at 4 stars, the author incorporated some original ideas into this. Updating is good at fours stars, since it's still to early wether it's consistent or not.

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Long chapters and a good read. Long chapters and a good read. Long chapters and a good read. Long chapters and a good read. Long chapters and a good read.

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One of the best HP fanfics I've read and executed perfectly! I really hope this story doesn't get dropped! I need like 1000 new chapters ASAP!

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