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God Of football

作者: Art233
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Izan, a Spanish-Japanese boy who lived with his mother and sister in the heart of Valencia played for the Valencia academy since he could remember. As life fucks as all, Izan found himself being laid off by his club for being talentless. Frustrated, Izan runs around his local pitch, trying to get the news off his mind. As fate would have it, Izan gets struck by lightning which gives him a system. Izan with the system embarks on a journey to becoming 'THE' god of football. We all know he can and probably will but how does he get there? ************ 1. set in post messi-ronaldo dominant era.[2022, post-messi-ronaldo peak era in Europe] 2. Real-world likeness. 3. 1700 words on average Let's get this novel up. Help me with your power stones and reviews and share this Novel ************* Also, all rights reserved for the companies and teams and also players I use in the novel since I don't know how image rights work and I'm too lazy to search it up on Bing-, I mean google here's the discord guys https://discord.gg/B7PXyBg3 1 dragon: 2 bonus chapters 1 magic Castle= 5 bonus chapters [will be released the day following the gift] 100 Powerstones= 1 bonus chapter [released the same day] 20 golden tickets= 1bonus chapter [will be spread across the week]

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Chapter 1Come on, a system

On a rainy night in Valencia,alboraya, the sound of running could be heard on a Pitch nearby.

There a boy who seemed out of breath was still chasing after a ball despite looking like he could faint any minute.

He seemed to be in a daze seemingly trying to forget something but couldn't. He was woken up by an accident that had occurred nearby.

Finally stopping, Izan realised that if he didn't take a break, he might pass out or, worse, get injured, which was a nightmare for any footballer, especially when he was so young.

The boy sat down with tears in his eyes. Now that the sweat had dried off a bit one could see a somewhat Asian face with really refined features that could easily pass as an idol.

The distinctive feature about izan was his blue eyes which was really rare for a person of Asian descent.

Although he was trying to look somewhat composed, regret and disappointment were written on his face. He had just been told by his youth club, which was the Valencia football youth academy, that they would be laying him off at the end of the season because he was not showing any promise.

This would usually happen only when one was getting to the age of 18 and was not showing any promise, but now getting to 15 years, Izan was being laid off because he was not showing progress or promise.

In contrast, he was getting worse. Izan underperformed in the youth league and was by far one of the worst players in the league.

The club could still wait for Izan to mature, but because of a recent budget cut in the youth program, players who were not showing progress or promise had to be laid off, and Izan was caught in this net.

He sat there contemplating and concluded that there was still time since the season had just started. As Izan stood up he felt the hair on his head rise in an erect position.

Izan then remembered watching a video on YouTube telling him how when in the rain and your hair is on end, it means you are in danger of being struck by lightning.

Just as he was about to move, something flashed through him causing him to go unconscious.

Ivan lay there and recovered after a while but couldn't stand.

['Host secured']. "Huh". Izan looked around but didn't see anyone in the vicinity. "Okay that was weird," Izan said.

As Izan was about to ignore the sound, it came again. A neutral voice spoke ["sequence started" programme starting in 3,2,1... ].

Then it went silent for a while. Izan thought he was going if not for the voice coming back again [system initiated ]. [System welcomes host to the legend sequence ]. WHAT THE F*** !!. Izan exclaimed.

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Hello, review time. first of all i usually writte review, if i writte one, between 50-150 chapters not so early, but as i read authors notice of it will help hus story i will do so. as this story should have attention of readers, at least those who love football. so, i do in seriousness: writting quality: 5* - even if you can find there some grammar wrongdoings, they are so little or not so important that you will have any problem to understand story or it will not annoy you in any way. author even stopped using weeks to his aging, and puting only age there, so there are no more confusion, so i dont find needs to lower rating there. . Story development: 5* story is focused on football, which i consider right thing to do, mean there arent to many neccesary part pf story which would be usseless a little of slice of life there is is fine as its in good chemistry with the football part of story. even his girlfriend (not officialy yet) and his mon has some show up but not to much that it would postpone the story, which i find with great appreciation, so its all good. only note which i find a bit a pity is, POV of others persons. what i mean, for example commentator of matches are done well and trainers too, occasionaly spectators too, that is all well. but to side story for example there is mentioned clubs like chealsea, barca, real are curious about MC, well if its true, why not put some managers talk out there, or some club happening in backstage out of Izan knowing it, well just thats is my feeling, but overall story is developing in fine and good way, so thumbs up. btw you can even see author, how he is getting better, mb not in each chapter but when you see start of story and see ch.20+ for example i can see the developement of author himself (positively) well next. . Character design: 5*. Izan is good boy for me, he, he isnt stupid, but clever. but now what i found somehow surprised author put that he is good in study which i am surprised, not that those who do atletics ar edimb but doing top of class is rlly rare. but i dont mind it, as he as character rlly do things as smartass, he rlly upping his stats in overall way which is not bad to do, just i already mentioned in some comments, he should also focus on some stat where he will be original and one of the best in team, for example 30 percent of his point to give always to this stat (passing, dribling, avaranes whatever choosen) and 70 percent giving to his overall grow up, but thats just how i feel he should do, i am not author so whatever :D you will rlly like Izan anyway. other characters, well i think they are put there, and i dont feel like they have to small time of show up, by me its in optimal way. next up. . updating stability: for now i will give 5*, story is new and is updated rlly well i just hope author will keep it up a d dont drop it. . world background: 4* true be told, apart that its mentioned its post messi and ronaldo era, we dont know anything about happenings in the world at all, not that we need it right now, but i cant give full rate here, as there were a lot of great guys in football, and we dont even know if we see them in story as of now, even as a managers for example, Pavel Nedvěd, star of Lazio, after Juventus who went do job for his club as manager in Juventus, i know i mention someone from my country but i put it as example, but story is in early stage mb we will see Manager Messi, Ronaldo, Cole or others in it in future. who know :D so thats only stat where i lower rating for story. . Overall story is great and even if author go premium, i plan to read it, and in my clear conscience i can recomend this story for reading. i personaly when i have 3 power stones rdy i always give 1 to this story alongside two others i rlly like to read curently. So thanks Author for your work, for story you showing up, and pleas dont drop it.

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