Game of Thrones: Champion of the Winter

Writing Quality 3* the writing is really good save for the mistake or misused word here and there. Updating Stability 4* Great chapter length on my device it's anywhere from 20-50 pages per chapter. Story Development 3* The author has certainly taken some liberties with canon such as Jon's real name, slight changes to people's personalities, but it is a fanfiction. The story has a good pace but during some chapters it just feels like it's dragging on. Character Design 1*The ridiculousness of the characters mainly Jon is what made me drop this; after a simple I'm sorry and some crocodile tears he forgives lady Stark for her torturous treatment; that's unrealistic there should have been some resentment, even Canon Jon showed a bit of resentment and he was a fool like his uncle. The other characters also feel 2d and unreal. World Background 3* it's already been made for the author it's a fanfic, the reason he lost 2* us because we only know of the north, he mentions that rob was born in the Riverlands, he in Dorn and a couple of other areas such as Bravos but that's all if this were original or I didn't read ASOIAF then i wouldn't know the situation in the world. (He also mentioned the free cities but what's that?? You just say that and expect readers to know? You need to elaborate.)

Great story, fantastic grammar, and each chapter is extremely long. With all the garbage I find on this site finding this is really a treat and it was a very enjoyable read.Thank you very much author and please keep updating this great story.

Brilliant story. Reading it on Fanfiction as well, but I'm so glad it's been added to Webnovel. Jon Snow feels realistic, even for a gamer fic, and his reactions are both fitting to his character and unique from his over honourable TV self. The other characters are also well done and have great interactions with the protagonist.

Hello there, La_Monserga I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that you continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works to create this great novel and I hope you don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 to 5 chapters per day or week if you are not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.

Great story, a lot of good stuff about this story from character development, character interactions, especially between different major groups. finding common ground between those who were expected to be more hostile with each other, its impressive. I really appreciate the quick action against the mountain too. lol no need to draw that out longer than other fanfics always do. a few tiny flaws but those are more of me disagreeing with the actions of the MC and not anything negative towards the story as a whole. Maybe a little more risk taken in certain situations for the MC. hoping he learned to consider his steps after what happened to the poor girl too and maybe even finding ways to remedy them and saving the next person he accidentally pushed in harms way! overall great work. keep it up.

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It was quite good. For the backstory the author created, that and the quality of the wording, I think that it's one of my favorite GOT fanfic Please continue like that!

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it a fantastic fanfic👌. highly recommend. hope it isn't the end yet🙏

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excellent writing and world building. The background helps the story without drowning the main content.

interesting

nice to see you here i read the story first on fanfiction.netbut no matter all are great and original in this fanfic, the author used to write with ASOIAF characters who didn't use to be written by the common authors and this makes the story greater. moreover, the system isn't too op even if there are AC elements. I think it's a good mix that make possible to have a kind of weak to strong story.

Muy bueno me gusta la estructura diseñada jajjaa bastante creíble y buen elaborado todo me gusta lo mejor es que tiene mucho tiempo para explotar todo la historia. A menos que haga saltos de tiempo sin escrúpulos no creo que se joda la historia.

One of the best GoT fanfic to read really. Give it a try it is pleasant to read no gore in it .😃👍👍 ............................................................................

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