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SYIHAAKIRA
SYIHAAKIRALv143yr
2021-11-11 21:32

Hello there, La_Monserga I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that you continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works to create this great novel and I hope you don鈥檛 drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 to 5 chapters per day or week if you are not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.

Game of Thrones: Champion of the Winter

La_Monserga
4.7
33 Chs

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La_Monserga
La_MonsergaAuthor

I very much appreciate your words. But please realize that releasing that many chapters in that short timeframe are quite impossible. I will update as early as I finish writing and editing the chapters. Thank you.

3yr
SYIHAAKIRA
SYIHAAKIRALv14

it's okay I just ask if you can release 2 or 5 chapters per day or week.

La_Monserga:I very much appreciate your words. But please realize that releasing that many chapters in that short timeframe are quite impossible. I will update as early as I finish writing and editing the chapters. Thank you.
3yr
SYIHAAKIRA
SYIHAAKIRALv14

you are welcome

La_Monserga:I very much appreciate your words. But please realize that releasing that many chapters in that short timeframe are quite impossible. I will update as early as I finish writing and editing the chapters. Thank you.
3yr
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Traps_Are_Gay
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Writing Quality 3* the writing is really good save for the mistake or misused word here and there. Updating Stability 4* Great chapter length on my device it's anywhere from 20-50 pages per chapter. Story Development 3* The author has certainly taken some liberties with canon such as Jon's real name, slight changes to people's personalities, but it is a fanfiction. The story has a good pace but during some chapters it just feels like it's dragging on. Character Design 1*The ridiculousness of the characters mainly Jon is what made me drop this; after a simple I'm sorry and some crocodile tears he forgives lady Stark for her torturous treatment; that's unrealistic there should have been some resentment, even Canon Jon showed a bit of resentment and he was a fool like his uncle. The other characters also feel 2d and unreal. World Background 3* it's already been made for the author it's a fanfic, the reason he lost 2* us because we only know of the north, he mentions that rob was born in the Riverlands, he in Dorn and a couple of other areas such as Bravos but that's all if this were original or I didn't read ASOIAF then i wouldn't know the situation in the world. (He also mentioned the free cities but what's that?? You just say that and expect readers to know? You need to elaborate.)

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Daoist351660
Daoist351660Lv4

Great story, fantastic grammar, and each chapter is extremely long. With all the garbage I find on this site finding this is really a treat and it was a very enjoyable read.Thank you very much author and please keep updating this great story.

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Kieren_Allman
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Brilliant story. Reading it on Fanfiction as well, but I'm so glad it's been added to Webnovel. Jon Snow feels realistic, even for a gamer fic, and his reactions are both fitting to his character and unique from his over honourable TV self. The other characters are also well done and have great interactions with the protagonist.

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DetachedDreamer
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Great story, a lot of good stuff about this story from character development, character interactions, especially between different major groups. finding common ground between those who were expected to be more hostile with each other, its impressive. I really appreciate the quick action against the mountain too. lol no need to draw that out longer than other fanfics always do. a few tiny flaws but those are more of me disagreeing with the actions of the MC and not anything negative towards the story as a whole. Maybe a little more risk taken in certain situations for the MC. hoping he learned to consider his steps after what happened to the poor girl too and maybe even finding ways to remedy them and saving the next person he accidentally pushed in harms way! overall great work. keep it up.

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Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you

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Reveal spoiler

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S_Toi
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It was quite good. For the backstory the author created, that and the quality of the wording, I think that it's one of my favorite GOT fanfic Please continue like that!

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Dragonsnow
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very good moreeeeee......,..,............. ........ ................................................................................. ......

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it a fantastic fanfic馃憣. highly recommend. hope it isn't the end yet馃檹

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